Every parent has his own way of raising a child. Individuals believe adolescents should seek their parents' advice before taking any decision in life while others disagree with this notion. Both sides of this argument will be analysed before reasoned conclusion is drawn.
On the one hand, children need the guidance of their parents in their day to day life. Moreover, Parents are considered as the first teacher of their offsprings. Adults have more experience and knowledge as they might have gone through the same phase in their life in which their juvenile are. For example, it is common for youngsters ask their mother about what dress should they wear in party or asking their father about the course they should opt for their future growth. It is well known that parents are selfless in guiding their wards. Therefore, constant tutelage of their parents is necessary for young people even though, they might be circumspect at times.
On the other hand, sometimes teenagers feel guidance from adults make them timid and limit their capabilities. To elucidate there are adolescents who are more confident about themselves. These people might go on to mature rather quickly and become self-dependent. Recent studies show that young children who are disciplined and mature enough are able to make wise decisions about themselves and develop problem solving skills in all situations.
To conclude, I believe that every child is born unique and by doing certain activities, they are able to explore their inbuilt qualities. Despite this, children need to be cautious while making decisions and should consult their parents before performing any activity as they have good knowledge and experience than them.
Every
parent
has his
own
way of raising a child. Individuals believe adolescents should seek their parents' advice
before
taking any decision in life while others disagree with this notion. Both sides of this argument will be
analysed
before
reasoned conclusion
is drawn
.
On the one hand, children need the guidance of their
parents
in their
day to day
life.
Moreover
,
Parents
are considered
as the
first
teacher of their
offsprings
. Adults have more experience and knowledge as they might have gone through the same phase in their life in which their juvenile are.
For example
, it is common for youngsters ask their mother about what dress should they wear in party or asking their father about the course they should opt for their future growth. It is well known that
parents
are selfless in guiding their wards.
Therefore
, constant tutelage of their
parents
is necessary for young
people
even though
, they might be circumspect at times.
On the other hand
,
sometimes
teenagers
feel guidance from adults
make
them timid and limit their capabilities. To elucidate there are adolescents who are more confident about themselves. These
people
might go on to mature
rather
quickly
and become self-dependent. Recent studies
show
that young children who
are disciplined
and mature
enough
are able to
make
wise decisions about themselves and develop problem solving
skills
in all situations.
To conclude
, I believe that every child
is born
unique and by doing certain activities, they are able to explore their inbuilt qualities. Despite this, children need to be cautious while making decisions and should consult their
parents
before
performing any activity as they have
good
knowledge and experience than them.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes