Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important v.1
Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important v. 1
In the contemporary world, when society develops day by day, some people believe that there are many choices for every person in the best way. In my point of view, I partly agree with this opinion.
In the one hand, the society is growing rapidly, there are many options for people to choose. For example, nowadays, instead of sitting in the office from 8 a. M to 5 p. M every weekday, youth could work as a freelancer because of the development of internet. They are able to work everywhere and every time they want. Furthermore, because of crazy-busy schedule, there are many online websites for people to go shopping instead of going to traditional supermarkets, which means that they could save time to do other activities such as relaxing or doing exercises.
In the other hand, besides those advantages, there are many people in poor countries that do not need the daily necessary things. For instance, in some countries in Asia or Africa, they do not have enough clean water or foods for their daily lives, which causes many problems in their health. Furthermore, in those countries, children do not have opportunities to access good education systems, which diminish their future careers and make those countries do not have enough potential to develop in the future.
To sum up, because of the global commercial market, people nowadays have many choices for their own purposes. However, the government should take care of some poor areas, which helps them to achieve these opportunities like other developed countries in the world.
In the contemporary world, when society develops day by day,
some
people
believe that there are
many
choices for every person in the best way. In my point of view, I partly
agree
with this opinion.
In
the one hand, the society is growing
rapidly
, there are
many
options for
people
to choose.
For example
, nowadays,
instead
of sitting in the office from 8
a.
M to 5 p. M every weekday, youth could work as a freelancer
because
of the development of internet. They are able to work everywhere and every time they want.
Furthermore
,
because
of crazy-busy schedule, there are
many
online websites for
people
to go shopping
instead
of going to traditional supermarkets, which means that they could save time to do other activities such as relaxing or doing exercises.
In the other hand,
besides
those advantages, there are
many
people
in poor
countries
that do not need the daily necessary things.
For instance
, in
some
countries
in Asia or Africa, they do not have
enough
clean water or foods for their daily
lives
, which causes
many
problems in their health.
Furthermore
, in those
countries
, children do not have opportunities to access
good
education systems, which diminish their future careers and
make
those
countries
do not have
enough
potential to develop in the future.
To sum up,
because
of the global commercial market,
people
nowadays have
many
choices for their
own
purposes.
However
, the
government
should take care of
some
poor areas, which
helps
them to achieve these opportunities like other developed
countries
in the world.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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