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Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important v.5

Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important v. 5
We live along with roommates while we are going to school. A roommate play a fair role in our growth as a professional. Some of the important qualities of the roommate are discussed below. Roommates should be friendly. If a roommate is friendly with us we really feel happy because we can share all the things with him/her, and at the sametime we can be ourselves doing the work we want rather than being feared of the roommates. When I was doing my undergraduation, I used to live in hostel with my roommates. They were very good to me, we used to eat our dinner together. Sometime we used to have fun by playing few games in the rooms. We used study together and at the sametime we used to crack jokes on the hostel management and have fun. We used to collect money and spend that money for the celebration of birthdays of all the people in the room and we used to enjoy a lot. Therefore we can have a lot of fun when the roommates are friendly with us. Roommates should be supportive in all aspects. For example, during exams we need to concentrate on studies, if roommates are supportive then they can form study groups by sharing the knowledge among themselves so that they can easily crack the exams. Some roommates are very lazy and will not allow other people to study and there are also few people who teach bad habits such as drinking and smoking to their roommates and spoil their life so it is good to be away from such people. Roommates should be caring. For example when I used to live in my hostel for undergraduation I was once suffering with severe fever. At that time my roommates took great care of me by taking me to the hospital, buying medicines and giving diet food for me through which I can be healthy again. Finally, a roommate should be friendly giving space to live, be supportive and should take care when needed.
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along with
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while we are going to school. A
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role in our growth as a professional.
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important
qualities of the
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roommate
are discussed
below.

Roommates should be
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friendly
. If a
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roommate
is
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friendly
with us we
really
feel happy
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because
we can share all the things with him/her, and at the
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sametime
we can be ourselves doing the work we want
rather
than
being feared
of the
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roommates
. When I was doing my
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undergraduation
, I
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used
to
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live
in hostel with my
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roommates
. They were
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very
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good
to me, we
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used
to eat our dinner together. Sometime we
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used
to have fun by playing few games in the rooms. We
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used
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study
together and at the
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sametime
we
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used
to crack jokes on the hostel management and have fun. We
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used
to collect money and spend that money for the celebration of birthdays of all the
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people
in the
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room and
we
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used
to enjoy a lot.
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Therefore
we can have
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a lot of
fun when the
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roommates
are
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friendly
with us.

Roommates should be supportive in all aspects.
For example
, during exams we need to concentrate on
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studies
, if
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roommates
are supportive then they can form
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study
groups by sharing the knowledge among themselves
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so
that they can
easily
crack the exams.
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Some
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roommates
are
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very
lazy and will not
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allow
other
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people
to
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study
and there are
also
few
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people
who teach
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bad
habits such as drinking and smoking to their
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roommates
and spoil their life
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so
it is
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good
to be away from such
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people
.

Roommates should be caring.
For example
when I
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used
to
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live
in my hostel for
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undergraduation


I was once suffering with severe fever. At that time my
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roommates
took great care of me by taking me to the hospital, buying medicines and giving diet food for me through which I can be healthy again.

Finally
, a
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roommate
should be
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friendly
giving space to
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live
, be supportive and should take care when needed.
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24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important v. 5

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
340 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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