Many people think that public celebrations (like national holidays, festivals etc. ) are a waste of money and that the government should spend those funds in a better way. Do you agree or disagree? v.1
Many people think that public celebrations (like national holidays, festivals etc. ) are a waste of money and that the government should spend those funds in a better way.  v. 1
Nowadays, some social behaviour problems have raised, there are several reasons for that, one of them, which I consider it as the most important, the imperfect use of the internet and social media. But, these issues can be handled by rising up the level of education and respecting others, especially females and elder people, which is the main role of schools, universities, and parents too.
Firstly, youths and adolescences use the internet on a daily basis, which is a good channel to see and learn the evil trends, because anyone in the world can write or upload a video that may contain terrible actions without supervision and these spread in no time. For example, teenagers watch awful videos about abominable habits of people of another nation, which may be natural at this country and tend to do this at their community. Thus, they have to be at a high level of maturity not to do anything and follow the traditions of their society.
However, supervision of parents, teachers, and tutors is the key to overcome such issue. Father and mother can influence positively in the personality of their youths by learning them how to choose the programs and videos to watch, and also how to deal with women and with the old age people, because these are the most sensitive. For instance, when a young person riding his car and sees a woman passing the road, he must stop until she passes, then continue riding. Hence, that is a kind of respect which must appear.
To summarize, the non traditional behaviour has spread in the last decade and these must be fought by the whole society, particularly, adolescences in order create a new generation who knows the basics of appreciation. 
Nowadays,  
some
 social  
behaviour
 problems have raised, there are several reasons for that, one of them, which I consider it as the most  
important
, the imperfect  
use
 of the internet and social media.  
But
, these issues can  
be handled
 by rising up the level of education and respecting others,  
especially
 females and elder  
people
, which is the main role of schools, universities, and parents too. 
Firstly
, youths and adolescences  
use
 the internet on a daily basis, which is a  
good
 channel to  
see
 and learn the evil trends,  
because
 anyone in the world can write or upload a video that may contain terrible actions without supervision and these spread in no time.  
For example
,  
teenagers
  watch
 awful videos about abominable habits of  
people
 of another nation, which may be natural at this country and tend to do this at their community.  
Thus
, they  
have to
 be at a high level of maturity not to do anything and follow the traditions of their society. 
However
, supervision of parents, teachers, and tutors is the key to overcome such issue. Father and mother can influence  
positively
 in the personality of their youths by learning them how to choose the programs and videos to  
watch
, and  
also
 how to deal with women and with the  
old
 age  
people
,  
because
 these are the most sensitive.  
For instance
, when a young person riding his car and  
sees
 a woman passing the road, he  
must
  stop
 until she passes, then continue riding.  
Hence
,  
that is
 a kind of respect which  
must
 appear. 
To summarize
, the  
non traditional
  behaviour
 has spread in the last decade and these  
must
  be fought
 by the whole society,  
particularly
, adolescences in order create a new generation who knows the basics of appreciation. 
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes