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Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss bot the views and give your opinion including relevant examples. v.2

Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss bot the views and give your opinion including relevant examples. v. 2
The effectiveness of using solar energy is debatable. however, many believe that it is much more effective than any other available resources, whereas, few believe that it does have disadvantages. This essay will outline both the positive and negative effects of using solar energy as a source for producing electricity. To begin with, the main advantage of using solar power is that it is a renewable energy which has no extinct to its availability. Additionally, It can be used for the whole of our life as a one-time investment. For example, we don't need to pay for current if once we have a setup of solar power, additionally, it is eco-friendly which causes no harm to nature and can also we can have a set up at anywhere like a terrace of the house, the backyard of the building, etc. On the other hand, the negative consequences are, it cannot be used in all seasons or every time or everywhere likely if it is a rainy or winter seasons, it would be a tough time of producing energy and in few places most of the time it showers snows or it is very cold to use the solar source for power. Secondly, it is too costly to set up a solar plant, as a result, it cannot be afforded by many people. To conclude, it has both positive and negative outcomes of using solar as a resource of energy but it can be used to an extent to save a few amounts and non-renewable sources.
The effectiveness of using
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believe that it is much more effective than any other available resources, whereas, few believe that it does have disadvantages. This essay will outline both the
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positive
and
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effects of using
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as a source for producing electricity.

To
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with, the main advantage of using
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power is that it is a renewable
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energy
which has no extinct to its availability.
Additionally
, It can be
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used
for the whole of our life as a one-time investment.
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if once we have a setup of
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power,
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also
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, the backyard of the building, etc.

On the other hand
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consequences are, it cannot be
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in all seasons or every time or everywhere likely if it is a rainy or winter seasons, it would be a tough time of producing
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and in few places most of the time it showers snows or it is
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to
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source for power.
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plant,
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.

To conclude
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and
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outcomes of using
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as a resource of
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it can be
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to an extent to save a few amounts and non-renewable sources.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss bot the views and give your opinion including relevant examples. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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