Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe there are other external factors that influence us. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1
Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe there are other external factors that influence us. v. 1
In the name of success, people are always striving towards a better life and wealthy bank accounts, but they do not consider how happy they are in the current moment. In my opinion, I think that a person’s happiness will always be according to his actions rather than throwing it on all other external factors.
To begin with, the humans who think their happiness is always dependent
on the otherworldly factors, can never be happy in their soul. This is because, they are constantly trying to find reasons for not being cheerful rather cherishing that moment, as they get bogged down for small things that go wrong in their activity. For example, if a particular planned work is not completed appropriately, they will instantly be corrosive and completely stuck, rather than thinking how can they achieve it.
On the other side, they are the positive thinkers who are always happy for small things, that happen in their lives. This is because, they get organized if anything goes in unplanned direction, they find unique ways to be happy. One's actions and their decisions are only responsible for their happiness. They have to clearly understand what makes them happy and what doesn’t. For example, from a research conducted this year, it is proven that the positive minded person is happier than their contrary. The reason is, they always try understand what clearly makes them happy and what doesn’t. At the same time, they never overburden themselves, they work according to their limitations.
In conclusion, I think that a person joyfulness will always lie in their actions, as they are solely responsible for all the decisions they make in their life.
In the name of success,
people
are always striving towards a better life and wealthy bank accounts,
but
they do not consider how
happy
they are in the
current
moment. In my opinion, I
think
that a person’s happiness will always be according to his actions
rather
than throwing it on all other external factors.
To
begin
with, the humans who
think
their happiness is always dependent
on
the
otherworldly
factors, can never be
happy
in their soul. This is
because
, they are
constantly
trying to find reasons for not being cheerful
rather
cherishing that moment, as they
get
bogged down for
small
things that go
wrong
in their activity.
For example
, if a particular planned work is not completed
appropriately
, they will
instantly
be corrosive and completely stuck,
rather
than thinking how can they achieve it.
On the other side, they are the
positive
thinkers who are always
happy
for
small
things, that happen in their
lives
. This is
because
, they
get
organized if anything goes in unplanned direction, they find unique ways to be
happy
. One's actions and their decisions are
only
responsible for their happiness. They
have to
clearly
understand what
makes
them
happy
and what doesn’t.
For example
, from
a research
conducted this year, it
is proven
that the
positive
minded person is happier than their contrary. The reason is, they always
try understand
what
clearly
makes
them
happy
and what doesn’t. At the same time, they never overburden themselves, they work according to their limitations.
In conclusion
, I
think
that a person joyfulness will always lie in their actions, as they are
solely
responsible for all the decisions they
make
in their life.
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