Tourism nowadays has got a different meaning because it has become having many types. People have become concerned with going to places that are extremely hot or cold. They usually have difficult weather. Hence, in the few lines, both merits and demerits will be discussed.
On one hand, visitors who go to places like the Arabian Sahara or African desert are definitely love wildlife. Therefore, they want to see wild animals. There are two major benefits of this kind of tourism. Firstly, tourists can live a traditional life without any type technology, and that helps them to relax. They also can do safari, but in freezing sites they can do sports like ski. The Guardian has published a survey that illustrates that about 23% of tourists all over the world prefer these sites. Thus, this strange kind of tourism is beneficial.
On the other hand, There are one main disadvantage of this kind of tourism. It is a risk to get dead because of carnivores and unacceptable weather. For instance, 41 cases died last year in Amazon forests because of poisonous animals there. This number is considered a huge number. If visitors of these places want to discover wildlife, they can visit safe places that prepared for that goal. Therefore, disadvantages are variable and lead to death.
In conclusion, while this type of discovering new places is exciting, it can cause terrible consequences. There should be an awareness of these consequences. I think there are other places that deserve a try in the world. They are better an safer.
Tourism
nowadays has
got
a
different
meaning
because
it has become having
many
types.
People
have become concerned with going to
places
that are
extremely
hot or
cold
. They
usually
have difficult weather.
Hence
, in the few lines, both merits and demerits will
be discussed
.
On one hand, visitors who go to
places
like the Arabian Sahara or African desert are definitely
love
wildlife.
Therefore
, they want to
see
wild animals. There are two major benefits of this kind of
tourism
.
Firstly
, tourists can
live
a traditional life without any type technology, and that
helps
them to relax. They
also
can do safari,
but
in freezing sites they can do sports like ski. The Guardian has published a survey that illustrates that about 23% of tourists all over the world prefer these sites.
Thus
, this strange kind of
tourism
is beneficial.
On the other hand
, There are one main disadvantage of this kind of
tourism
. It is a
risk
to
get
dead
because
of carnivores and unacceptable weather.
For instance
, 41 cases
died
last year in Amazon forests
because
of poisonous animals there. This number
is considered
a huge number. If visitors of these
places
want to discover wildlife, they can visit safe
places
that prepared for that goal.
Therefore
, disadvantages are variable and lead to death.
In conclusion
, while this type of discovering new
places
is exciting, it can cause terrible consequences. There should be an awareness of these consequences. I
think
there are other
places
that deserve a try in the world. They are better
an
safer.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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