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Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and cinnections between people. with this opipnion. 3
Children are the future of any society. There has been a growing debate on who should teach children to good members of the society. Some believe they should be taught by their parents while others believe they should be taught in the school. This essay will discuss both views and why I believe the influence of both, the school and parents, are important in training a child to become model citizens. It is believed by some that a responsibility of parents should be to teach a child how to be a good member of the society. The early years of a child's life, when they begin to develop habits and are still malleable, are spent at home with their parents. The children may then easily be taught these good attributes. It is from home they develop a sense of bond and loyalty. Charity, they say, begins at home. If, for instance, a child is not taught how to be courteous by the parents from a young age, such a child would likely grow to become a rude individual whom many people may find disturbing and a menace. For this reason, the influence of the parents in teaching a child cannot be undervalued. Teaching a child to be a good member of the society is also argued by some people, to be done in the school. A large proportion of a child's time is spent in school and children get to interact with many others there. This makes it a good place to learn attributes that would make a good citizen. Recitation of the national anthem practised by schools in the US for example, has been shown by a research done in Harvard university to boost patriotism of the students by over 80%. This shows that a child should be taught to be a good member of the society even in schools. In conclusion, although some agree that teaching a child to be a responsible member of the society should be done by parents, others do not agree. They believe this should be taught in schools. Personally, I believe that both the school and parents have a role to play in teaching a child to be a responsible citizen, as different values are picked at both places. I however recommend that policies to foster more cooperation between the home and the school should be encouraged.
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are the future of any
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society
. There has been a growing debate on who should teach
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children
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good
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members
of the
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society
.
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they should
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by their
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parents
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believe
they should
be taught
in the
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school
. This essay will discuss both views and why I
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believe
the influence of both, the
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school
and
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parents
, are
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important
in training a
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child
to become model citizens.

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is believed
by
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some
that a responsibility of
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parents
should be to teach a
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child
how to be a
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good
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member
of the
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society
. The early years of a child's life, when they
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begin
to develop habits and are
still
malleable,
are spent
at home with their
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parents
. The
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children
may then
easily
be taught
these
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good
attributes. It is from home they develop a sense of bond and loyalty. Charity, they say,
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begins
at home. If,
for instance
, a
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child
is not taught how to be courteous by the
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parents
from a young age, such a
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child
would likely grow to become a rude individual whom
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many
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people
may find disturbing and a menace.
For this reason
, the influence of the
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parents
in teaching a
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child
cannot
be undervalued
.

Teaching a
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child
to be a
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good
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member
of the
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society
is
also
argued by
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some
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people
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in the
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school
. A large proportion of a child's time
is spent
in
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school
and
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children
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get
to interact with
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many
others there. This
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makes
it a
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good
place to learn attributes that would
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make
a
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good
citizen. Recitation of the national anthem
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schools
in the US
for example
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been shown
by a research done in
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Harvard university
to boost patriotism of the students by over 80%. This
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shows
that a
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child
should
be taught
to be a
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good
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member
of the
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society
even in schools.

In conclusion
, although
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some
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agree
that teaching a
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child
to be a responsible
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member
of the
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society
should
be done
by
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parents
, others do not
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agree
. They
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believe
this should
be taught
in
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schools
.
Personally
, I
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believe
that both the
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school
and
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parents
have a role to play in teaching a
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child
to be a responsible citizen, as
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different
values
are picked
at both places. I
however
recommend that policies to foster more cooperation between the home and the
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school
should
be encouraged
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and cinnections between people. with this opipnion. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
394 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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