The education is the backbone of a country's future, while a good job is a key factor for a better life. This topic is of particular importance because it affects everyone’s life. This essay will discuss whether the pupils should complete their higher education or to start work after school.
On the one hand, university education is mandatory to get some type of jobs. By this, I mean that people who choose to become a doctor, pharmacist, engineer, pilot etc. are required to complete their degrees before they can be able to get a job because this type of jobs needs specialised knowledge before starting the career. For illustrations, General Medical Council in the UK accepts only doctors who completed their degree and passed some predefined exams to start a career as a doctor. In this instance, obviously, it would be better to complete the required university level degree first.
On the other hand, there are some benefits if students start working early. For example, a fashion designer could start working as soon as s/he finishes school because those types of jobs require more experience than study. Moreover, working at early ages might help students to be more independent and responsible in their life, through learning how to control their spending, how to enhance their knowledge and skill.
To conclude, there are some types of jobs that require a university degree. Nevertheless, starting work after school has a good side as well. It depends on the type of jobs which students prefer and are likely to have in the future. Perhaps, university degree and work experience are both important and they each other complete the criteria to get a respectable job.
The education is the backbone of a country's future, while a
good
job
is a key factor for a better life. This topic is of particular importance
because
it affects everyone’s life. This essay will discuss whether the pupils should
complete
their higher education or to
start
work after school.
On the one hand,
university
education is mandatory to
get
some
type
of
jobs
. By this, I mean that
people
who choose to become a doctor, pharmacist, engineer, pilot etc.
are required
to
complete
their
degrees
before
they can be able to
get
a
job
because
this
type
of
jobs
needs
specialised
knowledge
before
starting the career. For illustrations, General Medical Council in the UK accepts
only
doctors who completed their
degree
and passed
some
predefined exams to
start
a career as a doctor. In this instance,
obviously
, it would be better to
complete
the required
university
level
degree
first
.
On the other hand
, there are
some
benefits if students
start
working early.
For example
, a fashion designer could
start
working as
soon
as s/he finishes school
because
those
types
of
jobs
require more experience than study.
Moreover
, working at early ages might
help
students to be more independent and responsible in their life, through learning how to control their spending, how to enhance their knowledge and
skill
.
To conclude
, there are
some
types
of
jobs
that require a
university
degree
.
Nevertheless
, starting work after school has a
good
side
as well
. It depends on the
type
of
jobs
which students prefer and are likely to have in the future. Perhaps,
university
degree
and work experience are both
important and
they each other
complete
the criteria to
get
a respectable
job
.
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