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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course in university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views? Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

8. Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. how far with the above views? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v. 1
Generally everyone wants to get a good job after completion of education. Society has a different concepts, the majority has a strong believe that good education play a major role in finding a better employment on desire position however some people are in favor of experience after completion of school education. As far as my perspective, it is all depends on situation and luck to get a good job and position too but I have strong believe that besides excellent education if individual will have some experience will help you acquire employment as early. First of all, all employer show their welcome to the candidate who has some experience of practical work although, the work experience was not requirement as per their advertisement. To illustrate, if the girl has experience of working in beauty-parlor because of her interest and she knows to perform manicure, pedicure, facial massage and hair styling as well as she has completed her certification or diploma in this specialty she will get job on good position with reasonable salary and as quick as compared to that person who just had certificate without experience because in this field client will need hand-on service. On the other hand, we can see that after completion of higher education many youngsters are remain employed. For example, many talented candidate are unable to get job after completion of Master in Human Resource or Business Management for the reason that they do not have a working exposure to handle the critical situation, if they will get opportunity so initially on joiner position and with law package they can get a chance. In conclusion, I accept as true that good education with working experience in any particular subject as per individual qualification will make them more capable to find an excellent and professional growth in employment.
Generally
everyone wants to
get
a
good
job
after
completion
of
education
. Society has a
different
concepts
, the majority has a strong
believe
that
good
education
play a major role in finding a better employment on desire
position
however
some
people
are in favor of
experience
after
completion
of school
education
. As far as my perspective, it is all depends on situation and luck to
get
a
good
job
and
position
too
but
I have strong
believe
that
besides
excellent
education
if individual will have
some
experience
will
help
you acquire employment as early.

First of all
, all employer
show
their welcome to the candidate who has
some
experience
of practical work although, the work
experience
was not requirement as per their advertisement. To illustrate, if the girl has
experience
of working in beauty-parlor
because
of her
interest and
she knows to perform manicure, pedicure, facial massage and hair styling
as well
as she has completed her certification or diploma in this specialty she will
get
job
on
good
position
with reasonable salary and as quick as compared to that person who
just
had certificate without
experience
because
in this field client will need hand-on service.

On the other hand
, we can
see
that after
completion
of higher
education
many
youngsters are
remain
employed.
For example
,
many
talented candidate are unable to
get
job
after
completion
of Master in Human Resource or Business Management for the reason that they do not have a working exposure to handle the critical situation, if they will
get
opportunity
so
initially
on joiner
position
and with law package they can
get
a chance.

In conclusion
, I accept as true that
good
education
with working
experience
in any particular subject as per individual qualification will
make
them more capable to find an excellent and professional growth in employment.
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IELTS essay Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course in university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far with the above views? Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

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