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Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. Do you agree or disagree? v.5

Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. v. 5
Maximum persons express their opinion to prepare and have their eatings at home than going outside to hotels and meal shops. Well, this is a very interesting topic to discuss about health and wealth, and this topic will discuss all the factors including. Firstly, I would like to discuss about the health part. While having your lunch or dinner outside, it surely saves your time to cook, but also impacting your healthy life. You never know what type of oil or ingredients they are using just to make a taste for you. No doubt, that delicious fragrance attracts us, but inside they are selling us diseases and death. We have different age people in our house, everyone's immunity is different. And to digest that food is another challenge. The results are not shown immediately, but they are a slow poison. On the other hand it takes money that you could save by planning your items at home. Moreover, it will teach you to prepare yourself in hard times when you do not have any sources. In that difficult period you can adjust yourself by experimenting new dishes and it may surprise revealing your hidden talent. Explicitly you can save your hard earned money by not giving it to the meal-shops. In a conclusion, If I take both aspects into light, this is explicit that we do not have to reach out to restaurants. It could be a rare visit or outing with the family to celebrate an occasion, but this could never be a regular one because it gives you better health, save your money and develop you to be an independent person to make your own food in hard times.
Maximum persons express their opinion to prepare and have their
eatings at
home than going outside to hotels and meal shops. Well, this is a
very
interesting topic to
discuss about health
and wealth, and this topic will discuss all the factors including.

Firstly
, I would like to
discuss about the
health part. While having your lunch or dinner outside, it
surely
saves
your time to cook,
but
also
impacting your healthy life. You never know what type of oil or ingredients they are using
just
to
make
a taste for you. No doubt, that delicious fragrance attracts us,
but
inside they are selling us diseases and death. We have
different
age
people
in our
house
, everyone's immunity is
different
. And to digest that food is another challenge. The results are not shown immediately,
but
they are a slow poison.

On the other hand
it takes money that you could
save
by planning your items at home.
Moreover
, it will teach you to prepare yourself in
hard
times when you do not have any sources. In that difficult period you can adjust yourself by experimenting new dishes and it may surprise revealing your hidden talent.
Explicitly
you can
save
your
hard earned
money by not giving it to the meal-shops.

In a conclusion, If I take both aspects into light, this is explicit that we do not
have to
reach out to restaurants. It could be a rare visit or outing with the family to celebrate an occasion,
but
this could never be a regular one
because
it gives you better health,
save
your money and develop you to be an independent person to
make
your
own
food in
hard
times.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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