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Question: - Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. v.1

Question: - Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. v. 1
Many individuals say that cooking and eating at residence is better for the bachelor’s and the family than eating in cuisines or nutrient stalls. This essay will discuss why making dish at an apartment and having a dish in place of stay is ultimately superior. I agree, that cooking and eating at household is far better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. To begin with, many people prefer to prepare cuisine indoors and eat with their families or friends, because the daily bread which is cooked at one’s place is in hygienic surroundings. Most people, strictly adhere to cleanliness in their homes. In addition, the dish that is made at residence is a healthy nutritious to eat. Furthermore, the ingredients used in preparing a curry are fresh. Moreover, it is better to eat a cuisine with clean utensils, which are washed thoroughly. For example, middle class people in India prefer to eat food prepared at home, because it is hygienic and low in carbohydrates and fat. Additionally, they use olive oil in cooking, which is considered to be healthy and has proved to have many health benefits scientifically. On the other side, eating outdoors or in canteens can jeopardize individual’s health. Firstly, because its unhealthy and non-nutritious as it contains large content of carbohydrates and fats. Secondly, it is cooked in unclean atmosphere which might contaminate the cuisine and make it unfit for consumption. Thirdly, the utensils are not cleaned properly in these places, which might be another reason to avoid eating in these places. For instance, a recent survey was conducted by GHMC officials at Paradise restaurant and they found out that the meat which was rotten was used in Mutton Biryani. Apart from that, all the ingredients which were used in curries were expired and produced foul smell and so they decided to impose a heavy tax on the restaurant of about Rs 1, 00, 000 for not maintaining hygienic eatables and specific standards. To conclude, individuals should taste different types of dishes at home and restaurants on should not limit their choice of food. Consequently, care should also be taken not to eat in excess at these food places. People should know the ill effects of these meals and should keep in mind that these cuisines cannot be consumed on a daily basis. I completely agree, that cooking and eating at home is far better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens.
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individuals
say that cooking and
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eating
at residence is
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better
for the bachelor’s and the
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family
than
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eating
in
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cuisines
or nutrient stalls. This essay will discuss why making
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dish
at an apartment and having a
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dish
in
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place
of stay is
ultimately
superior. I
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agree
, that cooking and
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eating
at household is far
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better
for the
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individual
and the
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family
than
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eating
out in
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restaurants
or canteens.

To
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begin
with,
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many
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people
prefer to prepare
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cuisine
indoors and
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eat
with their
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families
or friends,
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because
the daily bread which
is cooked
at one’s
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place
is in hygienic surroundings. Most
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people
,
strictly
adhere to cleanliness in their
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homes
.
In addition
, the
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dish
that
is made
at residence is a healthy nutritious to
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eat
.
Furthermore
, the ingredients
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used
in preparing a curry are fresh.
Moreover
, it is
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better
to
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eat
a
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cuisine
with clean utensils, which
are washed
thoroughly
.
For example
, middle
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class
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people
in India prefer to
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eat
food prepared at home,
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because
it is hygienic and low in carbohydrates and
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fat
.
Additionally
, they
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use
olive oil in cooking, which
is considered
to be healthy and has proved to have
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many
health benefits
scientifically
.

On the other side,
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eating
outdoors or in canteens can jeopardize
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individual’s
health.
Firstly
,
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because
its unhealthy and non-nutritious as it contains large content of carbohydrates and fats.
Secondly
, it
is cooked
in unclean atmosphere which might contaminate the
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cuisine
and
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make
it unfit for consumption.
Thirdly
, the utensils are not cleaned
properly
in these
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places
, which might be another reason to avoid
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eating
in these
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places
.
For instance
, a recent survey
was conducted
by
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GHMC
officials at Paradise
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restaurant and
they found out that the meat which was rotten was
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used
in Mutton Biryani. Apart from that, all the ingredients which were
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used
in curries
were expired
and produced foul
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smell and
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so
they decided to impose a heavy tax on the
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restaurant
of about Rs 1, 00, 000 for not maintaining hygienic eatables and specific standards.

To conclude
,
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individuals
should taste
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different
types of
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dishes
at home and
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restaurants
on should not limit their choice of food.
Consequently
, care should
also
be taken
not to
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eat
in excess at these food
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places
.
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People
should know the ill effects of these meals and should
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keep
in mind that these
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cuisines
cannot
be consumed
on a daily basis. I completely
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agree
, that cooking and
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eating
at home is far
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better
for the
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individual
and the
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family
than
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eating
out in
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restaurants
or canteens.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Question: - Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
418 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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