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Many people prefer to read the news on a screen (smartphones, tablets, laptops), fact that has relegated newspapers to a second option. For this reason, there is the common belief newspapers will disappear sooner than later. Do you think this will end up happening? v.1

Many people prefer to read the news on a screen (smartphones, tablets, laptops), fact that has relegated newspapers to a second option. For this reason, there is the common belief newspapers will disappear sooner than later. Do you think this will end up happening? v. 1
TODAY'S TECHNOLOGY HAS MADE A HUMAN LIFE MUCH MORE EASIER THAN EVER BEFORE. THIS ENHANCEMENT HAS AN EFFECT ON DAILY ROUTINE OF AN INDIVIDUAL. THUSD, CERTAIN FILKS CHOOSE TPO READ THE LATEST NEW ON THE ELECTRONIC DEVICES DUE TO A PLETHORA OF BENEFITS. AS A RESULT, FEW PEOPLE HAVE THOUGHT THAT THE PHYSICAL COPYB OF THE NEWS LETTER WOULD BE NO LONGER AVAILABLE IN THE NEAR FUTURE. FIRSTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHY SUCH INDIVIDUAL THINKS SO AND SECONDLY, GIVES THE ANSWERE TO SUPPORT THE PRESENCE OF THE NEWSPAPER COPY DUE TO FEW REQUIREMENT. ON THE ONE HAND, READING NEWS THROUGH WEBSITE ON LAPTOP OR TABLET GIVES A PERSON'S FREEDOM AND COMFERT AS PERSON DOES NOT HAVE TO CARRY ALL THE TIME WITH THEM. THIS WOULD SAVE THEIR TIME AND SPACE IN THE BAG. CONSEQUENTLY, LESS NUMBER OF FOILKS USED TO READ THE PHYSICAL COPY OF THE NEWS IN THE PRESENT TIME. NONWTHELESS, TO READ IT ON THE TABLET PERSON NEEDS TO INVEST IN THE INTERNET DATA PLAN WHICH COULD BE EXPENSIVE FOR SOME GROUP. FOR EXAMPLE, READERS DEPARTMENT OF THE UK DID A SURVEY LAST YEAR NAD FOUND THAT 70% OF THE UK YOUNGSTERS READS SOMETHING DURING TRAVELLING AS THEY DO NOT HAVE SPECIFIC TIME TO DO THAT ROUTINE DURING THE DAY SCHEDULE. ON THE OTHER HAND, IT WOULD NOT DISAPPEAR DUE TO THE OLDER GENERATION. BECAUSE, THE OLDER INDIVIDUALS WHO ARE NOT FAMILIAR WITH THE LATEST TECHNOLOGY FUNCTIONS AND DO NOT HAVE HABBIT OF ADAPT WITH THE NEW GENERASTION FASHION. PERHAPS, IF THEY DO NOT HAVE SOMETIHING TO TIME PASS IN THEOIR AGED TIME, HOW THEY WILL SURVIVE IN THE BUSY WORLD. FOE INSTANCE, THE INDIAN NEWS PAPER PUBLISHING REPORT SAID THAT 60% OF THE INDIAN CIVILIAN CHOOSE TO BUY THE NEWSPAPER COPY RATHER THAN READING ON THE INTERNET DUE TO THE THEIR OLD HABNIT. IN CONCLUSION, NEWS LETTER INDEED PROVIDE THE SAME INFORMATION, WHETHER IT IS THROUGH TABLET OR PHYSICAL COPY. HOWEVER, ACCORDING TO ME, I DO NOT THINK THAT THERE WOULD BE AN EXTINST OF PHYSICAL FORM OF THE NEWSPAPER AS THERE ARE INCREASE NUMBER OF OLDER GENERATION IN THE WORLD DUE TO THE INCREASE LIFE EXPECTANCY.
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TODAY
'S TECHNOLOGY HAS MADE A HUMAN LIFE MUCH
Use only "EASIER" (without 'MORE') when you use the comparative.
MORE EASIER
THAN EVER
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BEFORE
. THIS ENHANCEMENT HAS AN EFFECT ON DAILY ROUTINE OF AN INDIVIDUAL.
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THUSD
, CERTAIN
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FILKS
CHOOSE TPO
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READ
THE LATEST
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NEW
ON THE ELECTRONIC DEVICES
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DUE
TO A PLETHORA OF BENEFITS.
AS A RESULT
, FEW
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PEOPLE
HAVE
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THOUGHT
THAT THE
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PHYSICAL
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COPYB
OF THE
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NEWS
LETTER WOULD BE NO LONGER AVAILABLE IN THE NEAR FUTURE.
FIRSTLY
, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHY SUCH INDIVIDUAL
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
THINKS
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SO
AND
SECONDLY
, GIVES THE
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ANSWERE
TO SUPPORT THE PRESENCE OF THE NEWSPAPER
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COPY
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DUE
Did you mean "too"?
TO
Possible agreement error. The noun REQUIREMENT seems to be countable; consider using: "FEW requirements".
FEW REQUIREMENT
.

ON THE ONE HAND, READING
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NEWS
THROUGH WEBSITE ON LAPTOP OR TABLET GIVES A PERSON'S FREEDOM AND
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COMFERT
AS PERSON DOES NOT
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HAVE TO
CARRY ALL THE
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TIME
WITH THEM. THIS WOULD SAVE THEIR
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TIME
AND SPACE IN THE BAG.
CONSEQUENTLY
, LESS NUMBER OF
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FOILKS
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USED
TO
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READ
THE
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PHYSICAL
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COPY
OF THE
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NEWS
IN THE PRESENT
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TIME
.
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NONWTHELESS
, TO
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READ
IT ON THE TABLET PERSON NEEDS TO INVEST IN THE INTERNET DATA PLAN WHICH COULD BE EXPENSIVE FOR
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SOME
GROUP.
FOR EXAMPLE
, READERS DEPARTMENT OF THE UK DID A SURVEY LAST YEAR NAD FOUND THAT 70% OF THE UK YOUNGSTERS
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READS
SOMETHING DURING TRAVELLING AS THEY DO NOT HAVE SPECIFIC
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TIME
TO DO THAT ROUTINE DURING THE DAY SCHEDULE.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, IT WOULD NOT DISAPPEAR
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DUE
TO THE OLDER GENERATION.
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BECAUSE
, THE OLDER INDIVIDUALS WHO ARE NOT FAMILIAR WITH THE LATEST TECHNOLOGY FUNCTIONS AND DO NOT HAVE
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HABBIT
OF ADAPT WITH THE
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NEW
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GENERASTION
FASHION. PERHAPS, IF THEY DO NOT HAVE
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SOMETIHING
TO
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TIME
PASS IN
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THEOIR
AGED
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TIME
, HOW THEY WILL SURVIVE IN THE BUSY WORLD. FOE INSTANCE, THE INDIAN
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NEWS
PAPER PUBLISHING REPORT SAID THAT 60% OF THE INDIAN CIVILIAN CHOOSE TO
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BUY
THE NEWSPAPER
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COPY
RATHER
THAN READING ON THE INTERNET
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DUE
TO THE THEIR
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
OLD
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HABNIT
.

IN CONCLUSION
,
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NEWS
LETTER
INDEED
PROVIDE THE SAME INFORMATION, WHETHER IT IS THROUGH TABLET OR
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PHYSICAL
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
COPY
.
HOWEVER
, ACCORDING TO ME, I DO NOT
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THINK
THAT THERE WOULD BE AN
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EXTINST
OF
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PHYSICAL
FORM OF THE NEWSPAPER AS THERE ARE INCREASE NUMBER OF OLDER GENERATION IN THE WORLD
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
DUE
TO THE INCREASE LIFE EXPECTANCY.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Many people prefer to read the news on a screen (smartphones, tablets, laptops), fact that has relegated newspapers to a second option. For this reason, there is the common belief newspapers will disappear sooner than later. Do you think this will end up happening? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
361 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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