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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by the teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by the teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. v. 1
The public thinks that giving assignment to children is the most important useful thing for education, while others argue that tasks should not be given to kids at home. Studies are important to students for their higher education, while others believe that a lot of work can result in pressure (stress) for children. This essay agrees with the statement that the tuitions play a major role in their studies. To begin with, the homework is the important essential part for the children. Because learning in school is not sufficient, along with this the students should work on the given topic at home. Then only they can successfully complete the test with higher marks. With the completion of these types of works with the help of their parents can be remembered for a longer time period, instead of studying it again. Parents can also know their children's standard, while doing homework. For example, the Oxford school has registered the practice works after the completion of school timings. These readings resulted in a higher success rate compared to previous years. Finally, the children are kept under pressure by giving a lot of people reading tasks at home. Now-a-days, institutions are giving most of the work to the students to get succeed in the tests, but it made a serious health issue like a headache in a very small age. To the instance, in the year 2019 the children who are studying in the university has affected by health issues. These resulted in giving excessive exercises to them. To conclude, the parents are arguing that the homework should not be given to their children, while some of them thinks that it plays a major role in the schooling. Giving practice tests are more important for kids to become successful in exams.
The public
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thinks
that
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giving
assignment to
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children
is the most
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important
useful thing for education, while others argue that tasks should not be
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given
to kids at home. Studies are
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important
to students for their higher education, while others believe that
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a lot of
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work
can result in pressure (
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stress
) for
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children
. This essay
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agrees
with the statement that the
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tuitions
play a major role in their studies.

To
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begin
with, the homework is the
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important
essential part for the
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children
.
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Because
learning in school is not sufficient, along with this the students should
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work
on the
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given
topic at home. Then
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only
they can
successfully
complete the
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test
with higher marks. With the completion of these types of works with the
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help
of their parents can
be remembered
for a longer time period,
instead
of studying it again. Parents can
also
know their children's standard, while doing homework.
For example
, the Oxford school has registered the practice works after the completion of school timings. These readings resulted in a higher success rate compared to previous years.

Finally
, the
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children
are
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kept
under pressure by
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giving
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a lot of
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people
reading tasks at home.
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Now
-a-days, institutions are
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giving
most of the
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work
to the students to
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get
succeed in the
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tests
,
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but
it made a serious health issue like a headache in a
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very
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small
age. To the instance, in the year 2019 the
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children
who are studying in the university has
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affected
by health issues. These resulted in
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giving
excessive exercises to them.

To conclude
, the parents are arguing that the homework should not be
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given
to their
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children
, while
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some
of them
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thinks
that it plays a major role in the schooling.
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Giving
practice
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tests
are more
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important
for kids to become successful in exams.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by the teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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