It is undeniable that adolescence can be a critical period for both youngsters and their parents. Although some people believe that it does more harm than good, I would argue that it is an essential stage of teenagers’ development.
On the one hand, those who believe that teenage conflict is harmful might argue that it can damage relationships between parents and their children. This is because such disputes can create tensions in the family. In other words, it is quite common for young people to begin smoking at their age to impress their peers, however, this would be resulted in confrontations with parents can lead to a complicated communication. In contrast, if there is no conflict between children and their parents, there will be a healthier communication among family members.
On the other hand, my view is that this conflict is important because it can help teenagers to mature. The reason behind this is that an assistance can be provided to these teenagers to make their own decisions rightly. For instance, a child may grow in a family of meat-eaters but feel strongly against meat. If this child does not voice their opinion, they will be going against their principles. However, if they are willing to be engaged in a conflict with their parents, their opinion will be much clearer.
To conclude, despite the danger of damaging relationships with teenage conflict can create, it is my view that this time of friction is a vital step to teenagers becoming mature and independently-minded adults.
It is undeniable that adolescence can be a critical period for both youngsters and their
parents
. Although
some
people
believe that it does more harm than
good
, I would argue that it is an essential stage of
teenagers’
development.
On the one hand, those who believe that teenage
conflict
is harmful might argue that it can damage relationships between
parents
and their children. This is
because
such disputes can create tensions in the family.
In other words
, it is quite common for young
people
to
begin
smoking at their age to impress their peers,
however
, this would
be resulted
in confrontations with
parents
can lead to a complicated communication.
In contrast
, if there is no
conflict
between children and their
parents
, there will be a healthier communication among family members.
On the other hand
, my view is that this
conflict
is
important
because
it can
help
teenagers
to mature. The reason behind this is that an assistance can
be provided
to these
teenagers
to
make
their
own
decisions
rightly
.
For instance
, a child may grow in a family of meat-eaters
but
feel
strongly
against meat. If this child does not voice their opinion, they will be going against their principles.
However
, if they are willing to
be engaged
in a
conflict
with their
parents
, their opinion will be much clearer.
To conclude
, despite the
danger
of damaging relationships with teenage
conflict
can create, it is my view that this time of friction is a vital step to
teenagers
becoming mature and
independently
-minded adults.
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