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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to an audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it? v.6

Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to an audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? with it? v. 6
Many individuals find it challenging to present themselves in front of people. It is considered that schools should be responsible for teaching public speaking. It is important as almost every field of study requires a demonstration of projects in one way or the other. I completely agree with this notion for two reasons; it helps students in giving job interviews along with giving a boost to the confidence at the very early stage of their life. Firstly, being able to speak persuasively and confidently is an essential skill for almost everyone. For such reason, a good deal of this expertise is required in a professional career. Although schools may find it difficult to indulge this skill in the course outline at the beginning, they will not regret it in the future as a clear and confident voice fosters self-esteem and personal assurance of the students. For example, it can be illustrated by the fact that 80% of the world's leaders have influenced their audiences verbally. Therefore, I believe that it should definitely be part of the curriculum. Secondly, this skill plays a vital role when students are interviewed for a job post. Because of having an ability to explain and justify the degrees, one can easily get the desired position in the workplace. For instance, surveys at the University of Manchester have revealed that 90% of the people are rejected in the interview session due to poor communication skills. Thus, it's high time that schools take oratory skills as seriously as any other basic skills. In conclusion, many people struggle while speaking in front of the audience. I agree that teaching the art of public speaking should be mandatory in schools. It has been discussed in this essay how good communication skills can help in overcoming the fear of public speaking and uplifting confidence.
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individuals find it challenging to present themselves in front of
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people
. It
is considered
that
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schools
should be responsible for teaching public speaking. It is
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important
as almost every field of study requires a demonstration of projects in one way or the other. I completely
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agree
with this notion for two reasons; it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
students in giving job interviews along with giving a boost to the confidence at the
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very
early stage of their life.

Firstly
, being able to speak
persuasively
and
confidently
is an essential
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skill
for almost everyone. For such reason, a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
deal of this expertise
is required
in a professional career. Although
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schools
may find it difficult to indulge this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skill
in the course outline at the beginning, they will not regret it in the future as a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
and confident voice fosters self-esteem and personal assurance of the students.
For example
, it can
be illustrated
by the fact that 80% of the world's leaders have influenced their audiences
verbally
.
Therefore
, I believe that it should definitely be part of the curriculum.

Secondly
, this
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skill
plays a vital role when students
are interviewed
for a job post.
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Because
of having an ability to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
and justify the degrees, one can
easily
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get
the desired position in the workplace.
For instance
, surveys at the University of Manchester have revealed that 90% of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are rejected
in the interview session due to poor communication
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
.
Thus
, it's high time that
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schools
take oratory
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skills
as
seriously
as any other basic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

In conclusion
,
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many
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people
struggle while speaking in front of the audience. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that teaching the art of public speaking should be mandatory in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
schools
. It has
been discussed
in this essay how
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
communication
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skills
can
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help
in overcoming the fear of public speaking and uplifting confidence.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to an audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? with it? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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