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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. To what extent do you agree. . v.10

As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. . v. 10
The past decade has seen many changes in education thanks to the application of computers. There is no doubt that these have brought many advantages to both students and teachers, but some people are afraid that in the near future, teachers would be replaced by these machines. In my opinion, the teacher's duty would be reduced significantly when using computers in teaching, not be replaced. No one can deny that the education has been advanced by applying computers to studying and teaching. Nowadays, students can get access to different sources of information and have a lot of ways to study online instead of going to traditional schools. For example, students can use the information they get on the Internet to do their homework, hand in the assignments online and receive their score or feedback from the teacher. Teachers also won't need to deal with papers of tests and attend classes like they did in the past. Therefore, the outcome, for learners and teachers, would be more efficient. However, it is impossible for the teachers' role to be taken over by the use of computers. Although this machine is considered as the most cutting-edge tool in the world, there are a great amounts of things that computers cannot perform excellently. More specifically, computers might not be able to do several types of works as well as teachers due to their limit of knowledge and experience, such as giving students detail corrections on homework, helping students solve their problems at schools, etc. Teachers can take advantage of computers to do many simple tasks like marking the tests but they still do play an important role in training students. In conclusion, it is the advent of computers that brings many benefits to the education. However, this machine would just be a tool for students and teachers to upgrade the results of their works and cannot take over the teacher's role in education because the gap of knowledge between human and artificial machines.
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seen
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many
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changes
in
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education
thanks to the application of computers. There is no doubt that these have brought
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many
advantages to both
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students
and
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teachers
,
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but
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some
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people
are afraid that in the near future,
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teachers
would
be replaced
by these
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machines
. In my opinion, the teacher's duty would be
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reduced
significantly
when using computers in teaching, not
be replaced
.

No one can deny that the
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education
has
been advanced
by applying computers to studying and teaching. Nowadays,
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students
can
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get
access to
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different
sources of information and have
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a lot of
ways to study online
instead
of going to traditional schools.
For example
,
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students
can
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use
the information they
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get
on the Internet to do their homework, hand in the assignments online and receive their score or feedback from the
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teacher
.
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Teachers
also
won't need to deal with papers of
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tests
and attend classes like they did in the past.
Therefore
, the outcome, for learners and
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teachers
, would be more efficient.

However
, it is impossible for the teachers' role to
be taken
over by the
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use
of computers. Although this
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machine
is considered
as the most cutting-edge tool in the world, there are a great amounts of things that computers cannot perform
excellently
. More
specifically
, computers might not be able to do several types of works
as well
as
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teachers
due to their limit of knowledge and experience, such as giving
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students
detail corrections on homework, helping
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students
solve their problems at schools, etc.
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Teachers
can take advantage of computers to do
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many
simple tasks like marking the
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tests
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but
they
still
do play an
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important
role in training students.

In conclusion
, it is the advent of computers that brings
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many
benefits to the
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education
.
However
, this
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machine
would
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just
be a tool for
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students
and
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teachers
to upgrade the results of their works and cannot take over the teacher's role in
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education
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because
the gap of knowledge between human and artificial
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machines
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. . v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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