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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to an audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it? v.1

Public speaking seems very hard for most of the people. Considering this, it is counted by many people that communication skills are to be teach in schools compulsorily. If questioned, it is essential to have good communication. I bolster the laid statement. My inclination is justified further. Discussing the former viewpoint, in every field the communication skills are necessary without it is very difficult to survive. The first and the foremost reason, there is a fear of speaking in gatherings and events so it is essential to keep students away from the fear. Schools and colleges should take responsibility to teach students how to express their views and to present themselves in public. This teaching of communication skills will be beneficial in their overall development. Secondly, many of the illiterate people became political leaders because they have commendable convincing skills on a contrary talented and well educated people are pressurized for several unauthorized actions. Consequently, it doesn’t matters that either you’re educated or not, most important is that one should be socially active and should built up friendly as well as business relations. Moving further, there should be separate periods in schools where specialized teachers should be appointed to take off the fear, enhance their speaking ability and weekly events to be organized for students. Apart from this, it is the prime responsibility of parents to assist their child and have fearless public speaking. As in the speedy growing world the competition is rising in every field therefore, communicating with people assist you in reaching your destinations. Nowadays, in many of the countries, referred applicants are given more importance than others and also they have better chances of getting a job in a particular company. To conclude that, though it might be difficult to speak publicly however it can be solved by educating students during their academic years so that when they enter in the real world apart from academic books they’ll have that much confidence to present themselves in public and can create an impact in society.
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hard
for most of the
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people
. Considering this, it
is counted
by
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many
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people
that
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communication
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skills
are to be
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teach
in schools
compulsorily
. If questioned, it is essential to have
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good
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communication
. I bolster the laid statement. My inclination
is justified
further
.

Discussing the former viewpoint, in every field the
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communication
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skills
are necessary without it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult to survive. The
first
and the foremost reason, there is a fear of speaking in gatherings and
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events
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so
it is essential to
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keep
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students
away from the fear. Schools and colleges should take responsibility to teach
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
how to express their views and to present themselves in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
. This teaching of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
will be beneficial in their
overall
development.
Secondly
,
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many
of the illiterate
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people
became political leaders
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because
they have commendable convincing
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skills
on a contrary talented and
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well educated
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people
are pressurized
for several unauthorized actions.
Consequently
, it doesn’t
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matters
that either you’re educated or not, most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
is that one should be
socially
active and should
Did you mean “be built”?
built
up friendly
as well
as business relations.

Moving
further
, there should be separate periods in schools where specialized teachers should
be appointed
to take off the fear, enhance their speaking ability and weekly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
to
be organized
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
. Apart from this, it is the prime responsibility of parents to assist their child and have fearless
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
speaking. As in the speedy growing world the competition is rising in every field
therefore
, communicating with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
assist you in reaching your destinations. Nowadays, in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
of the countries, referred applicants are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
more importance than others and
also
they have better chances of getting a job in a particular
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

To conclude
that, though it might be difficult to speak
publicly
however
it can
be solved
by educating
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students
during their academic years
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that when they
There isn’t usually a preposition after “enter”. Did you mean “enter the real”?
enter in the real
world apart from academic books they’ll have that much confidence to present themselves in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
and can create an impact in society.
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IELTS essay Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to an audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
338 words
5.5
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