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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task. What are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What is the best way to overcome them? Explain and include your personal experience or knowledge of these problems. v.5

Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task. What are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What is the best way to overcome them? Explain and include your personal experience or knowledge of these problems. v. 5
Learning about an international language is definitely a challenging task. While doing so a person trying to learn a new language will encounter many difficulties, of which the toughest of all would be the accent and their grammatical implication. However, these issues can be tackled with the help of a supportive education system. Every form of speech has a very specific way in which words are pronounced and their grammatical usage. As an individual trying to seek knowledge, they may face difficulty with the pronunciation and grammar application. Thus, what they are trying to say may not be understood by a native speaker. This is because their tongue is not trained in that manner. For instance, the French people have a different pronunciation of the letter Z. Consequently, making it difficult to understand a few words spoken by them. Despite all the challenges, it is possible to overcome these issues with the help of a supportive education system. The government should encourage the younger children to learn foreign languages in schools by promoting courses at subsidised rates. As they will have exposure at early age, they will be able to grasp the speech faster. For example, the CBSE board has made the Spanish language as a compulsory part of the curriculum so that, the children can learn an international language. In conclusion, a large part of the society feels that it is not easy to learn a foreign language. This essay argued that although developing an accent and using their grammar can be a tough task, it is possible to deal with them with a supportive education system.
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learn
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language
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difficulties, of which the toughest of all would be the accent and their grammatical implication.
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be tackled
with the
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help
of a supportive education system.

Every form of speech has a
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very
specific way in which words
are pronounced
and their grammatical usage. As an individual trying to seek knowledge, they may face difficulty with the pronunciation and grammar application.
Thus
, what they are trying to say may not
be understood
by a native speaker. This is
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because
their tongue is not trained in that manner.
For instance
, the French
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people
have a
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different
pronunciation of the letter Z.
Consequently
, making it difficult to understand a few words spoken by them.

Despite all the challenges, it is possible to overcome these issues with the
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help
of a supportive education system. The
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government
should encourage the younger children to
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learn
foreign
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languages
in schools by promoting courses at
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subsidised
rates. As they will have exposure at early age, they will be able to grasp the speech faster.
For example
, the CBSE board has made the Spanish
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language
as a compulsory part of the curriculum
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that, the children can
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learn
an international language.

In conclusion
, a large part of the society feels that it is not easy to
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learn
a foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. This essay argued that although developing an accent and using their grammar can be a tough task, it is possible to deal with them with a supportive education system.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task. What are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What is the best way to overcome them? Explain and include your personal experience or knowledge of these problems. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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