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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism? v.1

Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism? v. 1
Along with simplification of travelling processes due to the rise of low-cost airlines and easing of rigorous regimes of borders crossing for representatives of the vast majority of countries, there is also popular opinion that states the negative influence on countries with a lot of tourist sights. The main reason for such a situation with increasing of antitouristic opinions is the chaos tourists bring to streets of tourist places. Indeed, nobody would be satisfied, if they had to face overcrowded pathways on the round-the-clock basis for years. In addition, not all the tourists bother themselves to find out information about rules and laws local people live under. In result, unpleasant situations of the disturbing local pace of life might appear. Although the complete restriction of a tourist flow from certain destinations might seem as a good idea, yet there are less severe measures to change the negative attitude towards international tourism. One of those is to inform tourists about laws implemented in areas they go to. Moreover, not only official laws introduced by a government should be told, but also the rules of informal communication as well. These measures could prevent tourists from making mistakes and acting impolitely just due to the reason of not having enough knowledge about a country they are going to visit. At the same time such an action excludes the opportunity for breakings the law to be acquitted due to an actor’s lack of information. Summing up, negative opinions about international tourism can be justified. However, there are also ways to improve the situation via increasing of tourists’ awareness about local social attitudes.
Along with simplification of travelling processes due to the rise of low-cost airlines and easing of rigorous regimes of borders crossing for representatives of the vast majority of countries, there is
also
popular opinion that states the
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negative
influence on countries with
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a lot of
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tourist
sights.

The main reason for such a situation with increasing of
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antitouristic
opinions is the chaos
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tourists
bring to streets of
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tourist
places.
Indeed
, nobody would
be satisfied
, if they had to face overcrowded pathways on the round-the-clock basis for years.
In addition
, not all the
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tourists
bother themselves to find out information about
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rules
and
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laws
local
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people
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live
under. In result, unpleasant situations of the disturbing local pace of life might appear.

Although the complete restriction of a
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tourist
flow from certain destinations might seem as a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
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idea
,
yet
there are less severe measures to
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change
the
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negative
attitude towards international tourism. One of those is to inform
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tourists
about
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laws
implemented in areas they go to.
Moreover
, not
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only
official
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laws
introduced by a
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government
should be
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told
,
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but
also
the
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rules
of informal communication
as well
. These measures could
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prevent
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tourists
from making mistakes and acting
impolitely
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just
due to the reason of not having
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enough
knowledge about a country they are going to visit. At the same time such an action excludes the opportunity for
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breakings
the
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law
to
be acquitted
due to an actor’s lack of information.

Summing up,
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negative
opinions about international tourism can
be justified
.
However
, there are
also
ways to
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improve
the situation via increasing of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tourists’
awareness about local social attitudes.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6.5
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