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Many people believe that in order to have clean and tidy streets in their neighborhood, this should be the residents’ responsibility, while others think it should be the government’s duty. What is your opinion? v.3

Many people believe that in order to have clean and tidy streets in their neighborhood, this should be the residents’ responsibility, while others think it should be the government’s duty. What is your opinion? v. 3
The responsibility taken to maintain a clean and tidy street is a hotly-debated issue that often divides opinion. Some would argue that it is the duty of the government, while others cite that it is the responsibility of a citizen. Although governments collect taxes from people to remove garbage from the streets, I believe that people should be self-responsible and keep their city clean. On the one hand, people are paying a hefty amount to the government in the form of taxes. In many countries, these taxes include environment tax also, which means it is the responsibility of the authorities to support a clean and green environment. For example, in India, there is a special cess of 2. 5% on all consumables for preserving the environment clean, which is referred to as “Swatcha Bharath Tax”. However, this trend will not help unless and until people join their hands together with the government. On the other hand, people should take initiation to keep their surroundings clean. They cannot just throw up their hands by paying taxes and blame the government for not keeping the city clean, moreover, they should voluntarily come up with some innovative ideas to make the streets of the neighborhood more beautiful. To illustrate, in Bangalore, many IT employees have joined as volunteers to clean the street of a huge market. I believe that this approach of taking initiation helps to keep up the city clean To conclude, Even though the governments are doing their job to maintain the streets dirt free, I think it is mainly the responsibility of an Individual to keep his surroundings hygiene.
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taken to maintain a
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clean
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street
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often
divides opinion.
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would argue that it is the duty of the
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government
, while others cite that it is the
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responsibility
of a citizen. Although
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governments
collect
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taxes
from
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people
to remove garbage from the
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streets
, I believe that
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people
should be self-responsible and
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keep
their city clean.

On the one
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hand
,
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people
are paying a hefty amount to the
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government
in the form of
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taxes
. In
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many
countries, these
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taxes
include environment
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tax
also
, which means it is the
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responsibility
of the authorities to support a
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clean
and green environment.
For example
, in India, there is a special
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cess
of 2. 5% on all consumables for preserving the environment
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clean
, which
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to as “
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Bharath
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, this trend will not
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help
unless and until
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people
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together with the
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government
.

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hand
,
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people
should take initiation to
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keep
their surroundings
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clean
. They cannot
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just
throw up their
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hands
by paying
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taxes
and blame the
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government
for not keeping the city
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clean
,
moreover
, they should
voluntarily
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ideas
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make
the
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streets
of the neighborhood more
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beautiful
. To illustrate, in Bangalore,
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many
IT employees have
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joined
as volunteers to
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clean
the
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street
of a huge market. I believe that this approach of taking initiation
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helps
to
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keep
up the city
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clean


To conclude
,
Even though
the
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governments
are doing their job to maintain the
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streets
dirt free, I
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think
it is
mainly
the
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responsibility
of an Individual to
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keep
his surroundings hygiene.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Many people believe that in order to have clean and tidy streets in their neighborhood, this should be the residents’ responsibility, while others think it should be the government’s duty. What is your opinion? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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