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Many people believe that film is a less important art than other forms such as literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Many people believe that film is a less important art than other forms such as literature and painting. v. 1
Film is often looked down on as a less important art form in comparison with more elevated mediums like painting and literature. In my opinion, though the blatant commercialisation of film often undermines its claim to be art at all, it is a clearly more important art form for the 21st century. Those who would minimise the importance of film, can point out its primary purpose is to make money. This has become increasingly true in the last several decades as studios have assumed greater power. It used to be common for auteurs like Martin Scorsese, Francis Ford Coppola, and Robert Altman to make modestly budgeted films that earned decent returns. The advent of blockbuster films generally and superhero movies in particular make it much harder for studios catering to their shareholders to justify anything other than a tent-pole franchises. The artistic merits of these big movies tend to be low as they are often made by a committee and strive only for escapism and fan service. However, film has clearly overtaken other forms of art in the popular imagination. Hundreds of years ago, composers, playwrights, novelists, and painters were held in higher esteem and their works were the centre of popular culture. Music and film have now displaced them. Someone who would have become a great writer in the 19th century, would now opt to make films as they can reach the greatest number of people and the medium is newer and more open to possibility. A good example of this would be a young filmmaker like P. T. Anderson, who creates thoughtful and explorative works that also have a degree of mass appeal. In conclusion, film as an art form is ascendant today. It is, however, still important for audiences to tune in to a wide breadth of genres in order to encourage the film industry to remain vibrant and innovative.
Film is
often
looked down on as a less
important
art
form
in comparison
with more elevated mediums like painting and literature. In my opinion, though the blatant
commercialisation
of film
often
undermines its claim to be
art
at all, it is a
clearly
more
important
art
form
for the 21st century.

Those who would
minimise
the importance of film, can point out its primary purpose is to
make
money. This has become
increasingly
true in the last several decades as studios have assumed greater power. It
used
to be common for auteurs like Martin Scorsese, Francis Ford Coppola, and Robert Altman to
make
modestly
budgeted films that earned decent returns. The advent of blockbuster films
generally
and superhero movies
in particular
make
it much harder for studios catering to their shareholders to justify anything other than a tent-pole franchises. The artistic merits of these
big
movies tend to be low as they are
often
made by a committee and strive
only
for escapism and fan service.

However
, film has
clearly
overtaken other
forms
of
art
in the popular imagination. Hundreds of years ago, composers, playwrights, novelists, and painters
were held
in higher esteem and their works were the
centre
of popular culture. Music and film have
now
displaced them. Someone who would have become a great writer in the 19th century, would
now
opt to
make
films as they can reach the greatest number of
people
and the medium is newer and more open to possibility. A
good
example of this would be a young filmmaker like P. T. Anderson, who creates thoughtful and
explorative
works that
also
have a degree of mass appeal.

In conclusion
, film as an
art
form
is ascendant
today
. It is,
however
,
still
important
for audiences to tune in to a wide breadth of genres in order to encourage the film industry to remain vibrant and innovative.
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13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Many people believe that film is a less important art than other forms such as literature and painting. v. 1

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313 words
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