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To be labelled a ‘work of art’, a painting, sculpture or other art forms should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century, there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpiece’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. v.1

To be labelled a ‘work of art’, a painting, sculpture or other art forms should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century, there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpiece’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. v. 1
There has been a change in the expectation of every possible creature living on the Earth. Amongst them, there is also the presence of the lovers of Art. Since the past ten decades, there has been a shift in the preferences of the lovers of Art. It may, however, be also a possibility that there is a dearth of ‘True Lovers’ of the art in the current era. Whatever may be the case, it is the art which is always at the receiving end and has, to a large extent, lost its renowned charm. A work of art is a masterpiece which gets conceived in the mind of an intellectual who ultimately gives birth to it on a canvas. For an artist, his/her arts are dearer than the fine opals, more precious than the Emeralds! However, from amongst numerous such pieces of artworks, there are very few, lucky pieces, which outshines/eclipses other artworks due to their sheer uniqueness, adorability, attractiveness and eye-catching features, to name a few.   In the yesteryears, there used to be a very negligible number of such masterpieces. With the wind of the change, which engulfed the whole society including the intellectuals and their subjects, there has been a tremendous shifting of expectations, preferences, requirements and ‘true love’ towards the work of art. It is due to this change which has happened due to more materialistic needs that the population of art lovers and the quality of artworks has greatly declined. The direct, and unfortunate, effect of such a change has influenced the quality of artworks negatively.   Due to the paucity of art lovers and their genuine and matured followers, it has become a possibility for even a substandard piece of art to be categorised as a ‘masterpiece’, whereas the true works of arts remain a mute spectator. In a recent article published in the ‘Art and Culture’ section of a leading fortnight magazine, there has been a full article dedicated in memory of the maestro of artworks, the Late Mr. ABC. It was unfortunate to learn that the maestro had to spend his last few years in misery. This in spite of the fact, that the said maestro was a well-known international figure in the era of 1950s in the field of arts, particularly the painting. It can safely and with relevant evidence concluded that the kind of intellectual pieces in respect of arts which are labelled as masterpieces in the current era stands nowhere in comparison and contrast to the real masterpieces of art which were produced over the past hundred years.
There has been a
change
in the expectation of every possible creature living on the Earth. Amongst them, there is
also
the presence of the
lovers
of
Art
. Since the past ten decades, there has been a shift in the preferences of the
lovers
of
Art
. It may,
however
, be
also
a possibility that there is a dearth of ‘True
Lovers’
of the
art
in the
current
era. Whatever may be the case, it is the
art
which is always at the receiving
end
and has, to a large extent, lost its renowned charm.

A work of
art
is a
masterpiece
which
gets
conceived in the mind of an intellectual who
ultimately
gives birth to it on a canvas. For an artist, his/her
arts
are dearer than the fine opals, more precious than the Emeralds!
However
, from amongst numerous such
pieces
of
artworks
, there are
very
few, lucky
pieces
, which outshines/eclipses other
artworks
due
to their sheer uniqueness,
adorability
, attractiveness and eye-catching features, to name a few.
 
In the
yesteryears
, there
used
to be a
very
negligible number of such
masterpieces
. With the wind of the
change
, which engulfed the whole society including the intellectuals and their subjects, there has been a tremendous shifting of expectations, preferences, requirements and ‘true
love
’ towards the work of art.

It is
due
to this
change
which has happened
due
to more materialistic needs that the population of
art
lovers
and the quality of
artworks
has
greatly
declined. The direct, and unfortunate, effect of such a
change
has influenced the quality of
artworks
negatively
.
 
Due
to the paucity of
art
lovers
and their genuine and matured followers, it has become a possibility for even a substandard
piece
of
art
to be
categorised
as a
‘masterpiece’
, whereas the true works of
arts
remain a mute spectator. In a recent article published in the
‘Art
and Culture’ section of a leading fortnight magazine, there has been a full article dedicated in memory of the maestro of
artworks
, the Late Mr. ABC. It was unfortunate to learn that the maestro had to spend his last few years in misery. This
in spite of
the fact, that the said maestro was a well-known international figure in the era of 1950s in the field of
arts
,
particularly
the painting.

It can
safely
and with relevant evidence concluded that the kind of intellectual
pieces
in respect of
arts
which
are labelled
as
masterpieces
in the
current
era stands nowhere
in comparison
and contrast to the real
masterpieces
of
art
which
were produced
over the past hundred years.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay To be labelled a ‘work of art’, a painting, sculpture or other art forms should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century, there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpiece’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
429 words
5.5
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