Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

To be labeled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art forms should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century, there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labeled ‘masterpieces’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. v.1

To be labeled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art forms should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century, there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labeled ‘masterpieces’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. v. 1
The taste of people for artworks have changed to an extreme extent in this present age. As a direct result, many ordinary artworks are entitled as masterpieces while true pieces go unnoticed for the lack of evaluation amid thousands of cheap pieces. I completely agree with the statement for the following reasons. The number of art loving people has reduced significantly. With the passage of time, maintaining a decent life is difficult. So, people are busy in making a comfortable living. They hardly manage time to focus on artworks and are willing to hang the artworks on their wall or preserve them in their showcases instead of visiting them at galleries. Such activities have greatly reduced the value of real artworks. Besides, the real artists are losing their interest to create some extraordinary pieces for wider reasons. Firstly, they are not appreciated. Additionally, the prices of raw materials are on the rise. So, the artists lose interest to create some ‘true’ pieces due to lack of art lovers’ admiration to them. In fact, people are no longer interested in art anymore for recreation. For instance, my next door neighbour is a painter. When inquired, preferring anonymity, he told that all types of artworks started declining after the Second World War. Though there had been some changes after the 1990s, the real artworks were lost amid the cheap pieces after that decade, he said. He also believes, a large number of artist gave up job considering the matters. In fact, he was true. Furthermore, the art galleries reduced in competition with local market artworks. The artworks meant for gallery exhibitions are confined to local markets within a cheaper price for home décor. Subsequently, the aesthetic arts are experiencing rainy days in the supremacy of ordinary pieces. So, the ordinary pieces turned dominating. To conclude, determining the true art and awarding those unique works is a task that should be done very carefully in order to appreciate the work or genius from ordinary works.
The taste of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
artworks
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to an extreme extent in this present age. As a direct result,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ordinary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
artworks
are entitled
as masterpieces while true
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pieces
go unnoticed for the lack of evaluation amid thousands of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pieces
. I completely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the statement for the following reasons.

The number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
art
loving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
significantly
. With the passage of time, maintaining a decent life is difficult.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are busy in making a comfortable living. They hardly manage time to focus on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
artworks
and are willing to hang the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
artworks
on their wall or preserve them in their showcases
instead
of visiting them at galleries. Such activities have
greatly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
the value of real artworks.

Besides
, the real artists are losing their interest to create
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extraordinary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pieces
for wider reasons.
Firstly
, they are not appreciated.
Additionally
, the prices of raw materials are on the rise.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, the artists lose interest to create
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
‘true’
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pieces
due to lack of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
art
lovers’ admiration to them. In fact,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are no longer interested in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
art
anymore for recreation.
For instance
, my
next
door
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.
neighbour
is a painter. When inquired, preferring anonymity, he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
that all types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
artworks
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
declining after the Second World War. Though there had been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
after the 1990s, the real
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
artworks
were lost
amid the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pieces
after that decade, he said. He
also
believes,
Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"
a large number of
artist gave up job considering the matters. In fact, he was true.

Furthermore
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
art
galleries
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
in competition with local market
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
artworks
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
artworks
meant for gallery exhibitions
are confined
to local markets within a cheaper price for home
Possible spelling mistake found.
décor
.
Subsequently
, the aesthetic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
arts
are experiencing rainy days in the supremacy of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ordinary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pieces
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ordinary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pieces
turned dominating.

To conclude
, determining the true
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
art
and awarding those unique works is a task that should
be done
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
carefully
in order to appreciate the work or genius from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ordinary
works.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay To be labeled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art forms should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century, there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labeled ‘masterpieces’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
332 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts