Crimes are on an increase with each passing day. Because of this, many people are scared to leave their home to ensure the safety of themselves and their family members. Unable to find a solution, many people think that nothing can be done to stop these crimes from happening, while some are still looking for ways to curb them. Personally, I don't side with the notion of accepting the fact that crime rates can't be controlled any further.
Given how crimes are increasing every day, it feels like home is a safer place to be than out in the streets. Besides, with every measure the government is taking, criminals still find a way out. Hence people have lost hope. However some people are striving hard to come up with better plans to catch such criminals. They want to keep peace and harmony in the society and hence are working along with police and other judicial systems.
In my opinion, we can't sit back at home accepting the fact that crime rates have gone beyond our control. There should be an active involvement to help the Police in complaining about the crimes they spot. This will give a heads-up to the Police and chances of catching the criminals would increase. Moreover, we must all be aware of our surroundings and try not to indulge in conversations with shady people. Being active and responsible people will help us curb the fear of crimes and make the world a safer place to live in.
In conclusion, though the fear of leaving homes because of crimes is understandable, this problem can be mitigated by being responsible and helpful to each other.
Crimes
are on an increase with each passing day.
Because of this
,
many
people
are scared
to
leave
their home to ensure the safety of themselves and their family members. Unable to find a solution,
many
people
think
that nothing can
be done
to
stop
these
crimes
from happening, while
some
are
still
looking for ways to curb them.
Personally
, I don't side with the notion of accepting the fact that
crime
rates can't
be controlled
any
further
.
Given
how
crimes
are increasing every day, it feels like home is a safer place to be than out in the streets.
Besides
, with every measure the
government
is taking, criminals
still
find a way out.
Hence
people
have lost hope.
However
some
people
are striving
hard
to
come
up with better plans to catch such criminals. They want to
keep
peace and harmony in the society and
hence
are working along with police and other judicial systems.
In my opinion, we can't sit back at home accepting the fact that
crime
rates have gone beyond our control. There should be an active involvement to
help
the Police in complaining about the
crimes
they spot. This will give a heads-up to the Police and chances of catching the criminals would increase.
Moreover
, we
must
all be aware of our surroundings and try not to indulge in conversations with shady
people
. Being active and responsible
people
will
help
us curb the fear of
crimes
and
make
the world a safer place to
live
in.
In conclusion
, though the fear of leaving
homes
because
of
crimes
is understandable, this problem can
be mitigated
by being responsible and helpful to each other.
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