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The news media plays a very important part in the modern world. Why is the news media so important? Is its influence generally positive or negative? v.1

The news media plays a very important part in the modern world. Why is the news media so important? Is its influence generally positive or negative? v. 1
By covering news, political, weather, sports and vital events, the daily media shapes the dominant culture and political picture of the society. In the era of modernization, the information media plays a pivotal role. This essay discusses the importance of the news media in our lives and whether it affects in a positive or negative manner. One of the major reasons is that through the news people get to know about the events of the whole world by online information with the click of a button. News media can be broadcast through televisions, newsmagazines and online journalism. With the world wide web, every information can be accessed within fraction of a second. Parallely, people can see their response through the news channel in election polls or any critically infamous situation involving social issues like child trafficking. In addition to this, celebrities like sport stars or actors often receives their fame and fortune by the general public views in the media. The news media has more of a positive impact than a negative one. On one hand, cyclones can be forecasted by the news channels where government takes proper action or saves lives of the endangered people like that happened in coasts of Odissa, India, last year, where several inhabitants were moved to a safer place due to a hit of ‘feni’. Through the news, people can be motivated to increase awareness regarding crime rate or violence. On the other hand, people can also misjudge the products which comes with a celebrity tag and may lose their original identity. Similarly, spread of fake news can be sudden and people may get panicstricken hearing the news ending in a chaotic situation. To conclude, news channels provide a vast information as well as, general people can see their voting response or create awareness regarding social issues. The information web has generally positive influence than a negative one by enlightening people about the natural calamities.
By covering
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news
, political, weather, sports and vital
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events
, the daily
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media
shapes the dominant culture and political picture of the society. In the era of modernization, the
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information
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media
plays a pivotal role. This essay discusses the importance of the
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news
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media
in our
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lives
and whether it affects in a
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positive
or
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negative
manner.

One of the major reasons is that
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through
the
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news
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people
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get
to know about the
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events
of the whole world by online
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information
with the click of a button.
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News
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media
can be broadcast
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through
televisions, newsmagazines and online journalism. With the
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world wide web
, every
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information
can
be accessed
within fraction of a second.
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Parallely
,
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people
can
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see
their response
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through
the
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news
channel in election polls or any
critically
infamous situation involving social issues like child trafficking.
In addition
to this, celebrities like sport stars or actors
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often
receives their fame and fortune by the
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general public
views in the media.

The
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news
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media
has more of a
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positive
impact than a
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negative
one. On one hand, cyclones can
be forecasted
by the
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news
channels where
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government
takes proper action or saves
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lives
of the endangered
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people
like that happened in coasts of
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Odissa
, India, last year, where several inhabitants were
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moved
to a safer place due to a hit of ‘
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feni
’.
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Through
the
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news
,
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people
can
be motivated
to increase awareness regarding crime rate or violence.
On the other hand
,
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people
can
also
misjudge the products which
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comes
with a celebrity tag and may lose their original identity.
Similarly
, spread of fake
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news
can be sudden and
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people
may
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get
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panicstricken
hearing the
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news
ending in a chaotic situation.

To conclude
,
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news
channels provide a vast
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information
as well
as, general
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people
can
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see
their voting response or create awareness regarding social issues. The
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information
web has
generally
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positive
influence than a
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negative
one by enlightening
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people
about the natural calamities.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The news media plays a very important part in the modern world. Why is the news media so important? Is its influence generally positive or negative? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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