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Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime but others feel that little can be done Discuss both views and give your own opinion v.1

Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime but others feel that little can be done 1
Air pollution is a huge issue in this modern world. Many people believe that a worldwide vehicle free day can lessen these gloomy atmosphere. Whilst, a number of people claim that there are enormous ways to do that. This essay will discuss either aspect of the reduction process. A cooperative approach towards pollution on the globe would be an optimistic idea. First and foremost, it will encourage people to reduce the uses of diesel or petrol vehicles that produce exhaust fumes. And also, individual's can feel that the effect on weather, which is only created by themselves. For example, if there is no car and conveyance on the road are available, that will make people feel the freshness of the wind. In addition, it can impel some people to use physical transports and so on. These few instances can bolster the existing concept that only one days cohesive program can have a colossal impact on the planet. The government and public should be pragmatic about the actions that will solve the issue. First of all, if the government gives more importance towards highlighting the adverse ramifications of contamination, masses will be more wary of that. Thus, there are also needs to be limiting the consumption of conveyances which is relying on fossil fuels. For instance, most of the masses in Japan rely on bicycle, rickshaw and pedestrian whatsoever, for transporting. Furthermore, the government should make more infrastructure like: bicycle lane, pedestrian etc. However, that would be more convenient for people to use physical transport and lead to environmentally friendly circumstances. In conclusion, this essay discussed that how the poor air quality can be returned into nature. To infer I'm convinced that people are getting more and more aware of these major issues, so, I believe that it will make our ambience reliable in the near future.
Air pollution is a huge issue in this modern world.
Many
people
believe that a worldwide vehicle free day can lessen these gloomy atmosphere. Whilst, a number of
people
claim that there are enormous ways to do that. This essay will discuss either aspect of the reduction process.

A cooperative approach towards pollution on the globe would be an optimistic
idea
.
First
and foremost, it will encourage
people
to
reduce
the
uses
of diesel or petrol vehicles that produce exhaust fumes. And
also
, individual's can feel that the effect on weather, which is
only
created by themselves.
For example
, if there is no car and conveyance on the road are available, that will
make
people
feel the freshness of the wind.
In addition
, it can impel
some
people
to
use
physical transports and
so
on. These few instances can bolster the existing concept that
only
one days
cohesive program can have a colossal impact on the planet.

The
government
and public should be pragmatic about the actions that will solve the issue.
First of all
, if the
government
gives more importance towards highlighting the adverse ramifications of contamination, masses will be more wary of that.
Thus
, there are
also
needs to be limiting the consumption of conveyances which is relying on fossil fuels.
For instance
, most of the masses in Japan rely on bicycle, rickshaw and pedestrian whatsoever, for transporting.
Furthermore
, the
government
should
make
more infrastructure like: bicycle lane, pedestrian etc.
However
, that would be more convenient for
people
to
use
physical transport and lead to
environmentally
friendly circumstances.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed that how the poor air quality can
be returned
into nature. To infer I'm convinced that
people
are getting more and more aware of these major issues,
so
, I believe that it will
make
our ambience reliable in the near future.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime but others feel that little can be done 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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