Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.6
Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. v. 6
In the modern world, many people are keen to stay at home, when they become older. In this regard, some people believe that they should leave the house, when they get a certain age. However, others feel that forcing young people to departure is not a viable option, as they always have a right to live with their family members. Personally, I believe that adult person should take a decision by themselves. If they are willing to stay at home, parents should allow them to live with the family under the one roof.
On the one hand, it it true that some adults are tent to leave dwelling as soon as they possible. In this case, parents should help them with their problems such as renting a property, to find a job and design the interior. Furthermore, young people should be taught to live independently of their first year of life. Otherwise, they can be dependants when they become older. For example, many individuals are not willing to work by themselves. As a result, their parents are suffering from the lack of money.
On the other hand, it is clear that some individuals are pleased to live in an extended family. In this reason, some parents are not encouraged their children to dwell separately. Moreover, living under the one roof, may offer the greatest number of opportunities and chances. For example, older people can give advice to young people at any time, leading to a better relationship between the kinfolks.
To conclude, although many parents motivate their children to dwell separately, living together offer a various kinds of opportunities. However, in my opinion, I believe that the young generation should take decisions by themselves regarding to where to live.
In the modern world,
many
people
are keen to stay at home, when they become older. In this regard,
some
people
believe that they should
leave
the
house
, when they
get
a certain age.
However
, others feel that forcing
young
people
to departure is not a viable option, as they always have a right to
live
with their family members.
Personally
, I believe that adult person should take a decision by themselves. If they are willing to stay at home,
parents
should
allow
them to
live
with the family under the one roof.
On the one hand,
it it
true that
some
adults are tent to
leave
dwelling as
soon
as they possible.
In this case
,
parents
should
help
them with their problems such as renting a property, to find a job and design the interior.
Furthermore
,
young
people
should
be taught
to
live
independently
of their
first
year of life.
Otherwise
, they can be
dependants
when they become older.
For example
,
many
individuals are not willing to work by themselves.
As a result
, their
parents
are suffering from the lack of money.
On the other hand
, it is
clear
that
some
individuals are
pleased
to
live
in an extended family. In this reason,
some
parents
are not encouraged their children to dwell
separately
.
Moreover
, living under the one roof, may offer the greatest number of opportunities and chances.
For example
, older
people
can give advice to
young
people
at any time, leading to a better relationship between the kinfolks.
To conclude
, although
many
parents
motivate their children to dwell
separately
, living together offer a various
kinds
of opportunities.
However
, in my opinion, I believe that the
young
generation should take decisions by themselves
regarding to
where to
live
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes