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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v.31

There's no denying in the above given statement that visualization of photographs on televisions and newspapers makes content more effective, interesting and attractive to the audience. Following essay will justify my horizon. Let's begin, it is human nature that we are more bedazzled by the photos than words. If we have a visit in a library or bookstore we will prefer books with a cover page describing the whole story in a picture instead of a front page with a plain title text on it. Visualization process makes space in a human brain naturally and helps the person to memorize things for a long time. Nowadays, educational institutes are also adopting video presentations to explain students' context of the topic clearly. I still remember when i was in grade 10 my biggest nightmare was to learn the process of how plants make their own food themselves. I watch a video of photosynthesis therefore, still remember that procedure uptill now. Secondly, the habit of reading is slowly becoming extinct slowly from our society. Rarely we find people reading articles and newsletters. By publishing attractive pictures automatically, the reader's brain will force them to read that content. Moreover, this is the best technique to encourage youngsters to adopt the habit of reading. To encapsulate, my view people are more fascinated by the photos of materials they watch or read than meaningful words.
There's no denying in the above
given
statement that visualization of photographs on televisions and newspapers
makes
content more effective, interesting and attractive to the audience. Following essay will justify my horizon.

Let
's
begin
, it is human nature that we are more bedazzled by the photos than words. If we have a visit in a library or bookstore we will prefer books with a cover page describing the whole story in a picture
instead
of a front page with a plain title text on it. Visualization process
makes
space in a human brain
naturally
and
helps
the person to memorize things for a long time.

Nowadays, educational institutes are
also
adopting video presentations to
explain
students' context of the topic
clearly
. I
still
remember when
i
was in grade 10 my biggest nightmare was to learn the process of how plants
make
their
own
food themselves. I
watch
a video of photosynthesis
therefore
,
still
remember that procedure
uptill
now
.

Secondly
, the habit of reading is
slowly
becoming extinct
slowly
from our society.
Rarely
we find
people
reading articles and newsletters. By publishing attractive pictures
automatically
, the reader's brain will force them to read that content.
Moreover
, this is the best technique to encourage youngsters to adopt the habit of reading.

To encapsulate, my view
people
are more fascinated by the photos of materials they
watch
or read than meaningful words.
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IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often are accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures more effective than words. Describe your opinion

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
230 words
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