It is well said that family is all and all for everyone. Presently, some proportion of masses believe that parents in their old age stimulate youngster to migrate in mega cities. By contrast, others have conflicting views. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view. First and foremost, parents think that
young people can not only get employment opportunities but also achieve higher study by migrating in another place. Apart from it, leaving home and settle in a big city is the best way to overcome the poverty and teenagers can learn many leaving skills such as washing clothes, making food, paying electricity bill and many more if they leave home. Therefore, leaving home is fruitful for young people' s future.
Numerous points can be mentioned in the latter view. Initially, parents in their older age require a proper care. To illustrate, in later age parents feel monotonous and loneliness, they want to share their feelings and experience so it is the duty of youngster to take care of their parents in their older age. Moreover, parents do a lot for their children and fulfill all those needs that their children wants. Thus, young people must think that they get everything in their life only because of parents and stay with their parents.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, in this era of inflation leaving home for working is the need of an hour. However, still I believe that without parents people life is like a bird without wings so people must think about parents.
It is well said that family is
all and all
for everyone.
Presently
,
some
proportion of masses believe that
parents
in their
old
age
stimulate youngster to migrate in mega cities. By contrast, others have conflicting
views
. Here, I would like to account both the
view
points with my
own
perception.
There are manifold points to support the former
view
.
First
and foremost,
parents
think
that
young
people
can not
only
get
employment opportunities
but
also
achieve higher study by migrating in another place. Apart from it, leaving home and settle in a
big
city is the best way to overcome the poverty and
teenagers
can learn
many
leaving
skills
such as washing clothes, making food, paying electricity bill and
many
more if they
leave
home.
Therefore
, leaving home is fruitful for young
people&
#039; s future.
Numerous points can
be mentioned
in the latter
view
.
Initially
,
parents
in their older
age
require a proper care. To illustrate, in later
age
parents
feel monotonous and loneliness, they want to share their feelings and experience
so
it is the duty of youngster to take care of their
parents
in their older
age
.
Moreover
,
parents
do a lot for their children and fulfill all those needs that their children wants.
Thus
, young
people
must
think
that they
get
everything in their life
only
because
of
parents
and stay with their parents.
To recapitulate,
Undeniably
, in this era of inflation leaving home for working is the need of an hour.
However
,
still
I believe that without
parents
people
life is like a bird without wings
so
people
must
think
about
parents
.
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22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes