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Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at work place Do you agree or disagree with statement v.2

Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at work place v. 2
Uniform combines someone with ideal principles appealing to well being of working sector. Presently, wearing uniform is considered to be a lucrative idea in order to maintain standard of work by setting up benchmark for workers. Here, I would like to account with the given statement. Manifold points are there to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, without uniform working places are like ' a bird without wings ' . To illustrate, uniforms not only relize someone his responsibility being a part of organization but also make him obedience to rules and regulations. Thus, schools, colleges, companies and health centres require uniform to uplift the standard and reputation in the society. Apart from it, uniform, a symbol of identification, is lucrative to identify members associated with the organization especially during festive ceremonies. Hence, it makes it easier to stop entrance of outsiders at work places to avert mishappenings. Further emphasising on my point of view. Uniform plays a magnificent role to evolve unity in diversity. For instance, uniform develops a sense of equality among people of different racials, casts, and categories like haves and have-nots. As a result, it vanished discrimination and therefore workers make combined efforts for achieving targets. In addition, dress code might be fruitful to keep people away from buying fashionable outfits. Therefore, people are expected to follow ' simple living high thinking ' along with saving time and money. Last but not least, dress code being respect to dignity of employees by offering unique look at working segments. To recapitulate, uniform represents artistic expressions of human nature belongings to specific working zone. Undeniably, uniforms put some restrictions on the freedom of employees. However, I still believe that setting a particular dress code is need of an hour for a firm to maintain discipline and equality.
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combines someone with ideal principles appealing to
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well being
of
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working
sector.
Presently
, wearing
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uniform
is considered
to be a lucrative
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idea
in order to maintain standard of work by setting up benchmark for workers. Here, I would like to account with

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the
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given
statement.

Manifold points are there to endorse my point of view.
First
and foremost, without
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uniform
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working
places are like ' a bird without wings '
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.
To illustrate,
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uniforms
not
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relize
someone his responsibility being a part of organization
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but
also
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make
him obedience to
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rules
and regulations.
Thus
, schools, colleges,
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companies
and health
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centres
require
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uniform
to uplift the standard and reputation in the society. Apart from it,
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uniform
, a symbol of identification, is lucrative to identify members associated with the organization
especially
during festive ceremonies.
Hence
, it
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makes
it easier to
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stop
entrance of outsiders at work places to avert
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mishappenings
.

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Further
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emphasising
on my point of view.
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Uniform
plays a magnificent role to evolve unity in diversity.
For instance
,
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uniform
develops a sense of equality among
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people
of
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different
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racials
, casts, and categories like haves and
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have-nots
.
As a result
, it vanished discrimination and
therefore
workers
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make
combined efforts for achieving targets.
In addition
, dress code might be fruitful to
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keep
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people
away from buying fashionable outfits.
Therefore
,
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people
are
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expected
to follow ' simple living high thinking ' along with saving time and money. Last
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but
not least, dress code being respect to dignity of employees by offering unique look at
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working
segments.

To recapitulate,
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uniform
represents artistic expressions of human nature belongings to specific
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working
zone.
Undeniably
,
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uniforms
put
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some
restrictions on the freedom of employees.
However
, I
still
believe that setting a particular dress code
is need
of an hour for a firm to maintain discipline and equality.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes
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IELTS essay Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at work place v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
301 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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