Museum is the very interesting place and some people can also get knowledge of the ancient things of the specific reason. While, the admission charge is taken by museums for different purposes. I believe that, it is the positive things to get some amount of charge.
Firstly, museum is a place, where many local people, student and tourist are coming to visit and get knowledge about the past culture and monument build by the ancient people. However, it is compulsory to pay charge by museum because of the museum also change direction to attract the visitors. The maintenance also requires keeping the all things to clean and attractive. For instance, the exhibition also held by the museum to provide knowledge about past culture and save the value in future.
Secondly, if the museum comity allow to people free for the entry then all kind of people visit again and again. Because of the reason value of the museum goes downward. Adding that, it is also disturb the visitor came from other country and history lovers. The biggest disadvantage is that local community disturbs the environment of museum with negative aspects. For example, they create the disturbing and also damage the valuable ancient model and things.
To sum up, I would like to say that the some amount of entrance fees should be compulsory. However they have on maintenance and new creativity. While the some amount of relaxation for the student visitor hardly to pay own self. It clear seen that advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Museum
is the
very
interesting place and
some
people
can
also
get
knowledge of the ancient things of the specific reason. While, the admission charge
is taken
by
museums
for
different
purposes. I believe that, it is the
positive
things to
get
some
amount of charge.
Firstly
,
museum
is a place, where
many
local
people
, student and tourist are coming to visit and
get
knowledge about the past culture and monument build by the ancient
people
.
However
, it is compulsory to pay charge by
museum
because
of the
museum
also
change
direction to attract the visitors. The maintenance
also
requires keeping the all things to clean and attractive.
For instance
, the exhibition
also
held by the
museum
to provide knowledge about past culture and save the value
in future
.
Secondly
, if the
museum
comity
allow
to
people
free for the entry then all kind of
people
visit again and again.
Because
of the reason value of the
museum
goes downward. Adding that, it is
also
disturb
the visitor came from other country and history lovers. The biggest disadvantage is that local community disturbs the environment of
museum
with
negative
aspects.
For example
, they create the disturbing and
also
damage the valuable ancient model and things.
To sum up, I would like to say that the
some
amount of entrance fees should be compulsory.
However
they have on maintenance and new creativity. While the
some
amount of relaxation for the student visitor hardly to pay
own
self. It
clear
seen
that advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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