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, many minority languages are dying out. Some people think that it is unnecessary to save these languages. To what extent do you agree with rhis perspective v.2

, many minority languages are dying out. Some people think that it is unnecessary to save these languages. 2
National language is considered as a nation' s special feature as it symbolizes things a country owns. Some international languages gradually dominate the popularity of other languages, thus, this fact drives minority languages to the verge of extinction. Personally, I strongly believe that people should use their own mother tongue to prevent it from extinction as follows. First and foremost,
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Some
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languages
gradually
dominate the popularity of other
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languages
,
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, this fact drives minority
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languages
to the verge of extinction.
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IELTS essay , many minority languages are dying out. Some people think that it is unnecessary to save these languages. 2

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
60 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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