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As some dominant languages are more widely spoken all over the world, many minority languages are dying out. Some people think that it is unnescessary to save these languages. To what extend do you agree with this perspective? v.1

As some dominant languages are more widely spoken all over the world, many minority languages are dying out. Some people think that it is unnescessary to save these languages. v. 1
There are a great number of different languages in the world. Nevertheless, some international languages are widely spoken around the world, while other minority ones gradually tend to be eliminated. On the one hand, speaking some main languages in all countries helps us easily communicate with each other. Consequently, it makes the interaction and relationship among countries or continents become closer and more effectively. To be specific, people will not need to worry about how to make foreigners understand what they want to express or how to see through what they are talking about. As an example, many foreign tourists come to Viet Nam annually. In fact, many Vietnamese do not know English, thus it is quite hard for them to ask natives for something they need. On the other hand, their languages not only represent a community or a region but also their unique cultural traditions. Specially, each nation has its own mother touge and it distinguish this country from another. To illustrate, in olden days, the ancient Egypt carved their language called hieroglyphs into stone slabs which is invaluable now. However, if this language disappear, we can not discover the traditional myths of this civilization. To conclude, although the fewer language we speak, the easier we communicate with each other, many minority languages contribute to the ancient culture which we are responsible to remain. Personally, i think that we all are aware of saving these languages anyways.
There are a great number of
different
languages
in the world.
Nevertheless
,
some
international
languages
are
widely
spoken around the world, while
other
minority ones
gradually
tend to
be eliminated
.

On the one hand, speaking
some
main
languages
in all countries
helps
us
easily
communicate with each
other
.
Consequently
, it
makes
the interaction and relationship among countries or continents become closer and more
effectively
. To be specific,
people
will not need to worry about how to
make
foreigners understand what they want to express or how to
see
through what they are talking about. As an example,
many
foreign tourists
come
to
Viet
Nam
annually
. In fact,
many
Vietnamese do not know English,
thus
it is quite
hard
for them to ask natives for something they need.

On the
other
hand, their
languages
not
only
represent a community or a region
but
also
their unique cultural traditions.
Specially
, each nation has its
own
mother
touge
and it
distinguish
this country from another. To illustrate, in olden days, the
ancient Egypt
carved their
language
called hieroglyphs into stone slabs which is invaluable
now
.
However
, if this
language
disappear, we can not discover the traditional myths of this civilization.

To conclude
, although the fewer
language
we speak, the easier we communicate with each
other
,
many
minority
languages
contribute to the ancient culture which we are responsible to remain.
Personally
,
i
think
that we all are aware of saving these
languages
anyways.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay As some dominant languages are more widely spoken all over the world, many minority languages are dying out. Some people think that it is unnescessary to save these languages. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
239 words
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