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It is thought by some that a school teacher's role is to provide and inspire. However, other people believe that a teacher's primary role is to pass on knowledge. What do you think is the role of a teacher? ? v.2

It is thought by some that a school teacher's role is to provide and inspire. However, other people believe that a teacher's primary role is to pass on knowledge. What do you think is the role of a teacher? ? v. 2
The role of teacher at school increasingly has contrary opinions among many people. While teachers own responsibility to provide students with motivation and inspiration, others strongly agree that their major work is knowledge transfer. In my opinion, not only are teachers enthusiastic inspiratory but a person giving students lively examples to lessons as well as follows. First and foremost, encouragement from teachers attaches an importance to student' s education at school. To be specific, students need a teacher who gives them more inspirations to develop, importantly, instructions to do basic things first. Besides, tutor can show how to determine their target to try their best, which creates opportunities to reach their dreams day by day. Next, teacher is the person showing how to put knowledge into practice, thus, teacher' s knowledge passing plays a vital role in students' education at school. For instances, technology demands instructions from teachers as this. field owns many sorts of practical knowledge which is drawn from experiences. Consequently, they are essential to make students completely understand applied science in real life. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that teacher' s role is essential to education' s development, which is because they are not only likely to urge students to make efforts and inspire enthusiasm but also person who conveys knowledge.
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10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS essay It is thought by some that a school teacher's role is to provide and inspire. However, other people believe that a teacher's primary role is to pass on knowledge. What do you think is the role of a teacher? ? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
219 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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