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Many governments think that economic development in important goal. Others think that other aspects are equally important for the development of country. discuss both the views and give your opinion. v.2

Many governments think that economic development in important goal. Others think that other aspects are equally important for the development of country. v. 2
In current scenario, local authority is to be considered as an consequential part of any nation. Plethora of bureaucrats urge that the financial development is the most essential aim for the progress of country. However, others reckon that for the betterment of the nation not only economic aspect, but also other aspects such as culture and tradition, education, and health so on are important. In my opinion, all prospects play an indispensable role for the growth of nation, which are going to be articulated in trailed paragraphs. At the outset monitory development is necessary for the country. Firstly, government can keep up their relationship with other country' s authorities with the help of money. To quote an example, local regulators of India can ameliorate their import and export business, by the dint of they develop their country' s economic progress which engender to make new industrial construction, and for the public that stands as an epitome. such several examples are present around the globe. Secondly, the country who is well developed by the economic, never fall in debt or any other losses. On the other side, different aspects like, education and health are also vital for the nation. If country has pots of money, but never use in health services and studies than that rupees are worthless. Moreover, devoid of education, people become illiterate, and unemployment ratio is also burgeoning, which obstruct the development of country. To cite an example, rural areas of India, who still follow the conventional method of teaching. Owing to this India is still considering as a developing country as compare to others, which can be considered as a paragon. To sum up, for the wholesome growth of country government should understand the values of every aspects not only financial values.
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be considered
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an
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nation
. Plethora of bureaucrats urge that the financial development is the most essential aim for the progress of
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country
.
However
, others reckon that for the betterment of the
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nation
not
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only
economic
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aspect
,
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but
also
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other
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aspects
such as culture and tradition, education, and health
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so
on are
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important
. In my opinion, all prospects play an indispensable role for the growth of
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nation
, which are going to
be articulated
in trailed paragraphs.

At the outset monitory development is necessary for the
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country
.
Firstly
,
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government
can
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keep
up their relationship with
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other
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country&
#039; s authorities with the
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help
of money. To quote an example, local regulators of India can ameliorate their import and export business, by the dint of they develop their
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country&
#039; s economic progress which engender to
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make
new industrial construction, and for the public that stands as an epitome.
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such
several examples are present around the globe.
Secondly
, the
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country
who is
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well developed
by the economic, never fall in debt or any
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other
losses.

On the
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other
side,
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different
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aspects
like, education and health are
also
vital for the
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nation
. If
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country
has pots of money,
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but
never
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use
in health services and studies than that rupees are worthless.
Moreover
, devoid of education,
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people
become illiterate, and unemployment ratio is
also
burgeoning, which obstruct the development of
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country
. To cite an example, rural areas of India, who
still
follow the conventional method of teaching. Owing to this India is
still
considering as a developing
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country
as compare to others, which can
be considered
as a paragon.

To sum up, for the wholesome growth of
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country
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government
should understand the values of every
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aspects
not
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only
financial values.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Many governments think that economic development in important goal. Others think that other aspects are equally important for the development of country. v. 2

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