Many families devolve their elders to care homes to be nurtured. Although this issue brings positive side such as regular programmed - treatments, its negative side such as being mentally isolated can be considered.
The proponents of this occurrence might assume that care homes provide great nursing programs which are scheduled well. This is because care homes or nursing homes is systematically organised. By dint of this, the families' fellows freely enjoy their business without feeling anxiety or worry. As an illustration, Mom Home cares which lies in West Jakarta, arrange all the elders' activities in 24-hour schedule. The nurses start to wake the patients up at 5. 00 am then doing physical exercise in every morning, they set the meal times up to 3 times a day, they prepare warm water for taking bath in the evening, the employees are also scheduled to invite the elders to enjoy walking around. Shortly, they keep the ageing people there with a good schedule.
Looking from a different perspective, letting the elders live at home cares incurs such a lonely feeling to the elders involved. this is because they will be separated from their beloved families. They will miss their children, they will be unable to make a joke with their grand sons and their grand daughters everyday. This, then, finally b ajarings about alienation, and at worst, the elders will feel being expelled and depressed.
In conclusion, I believe that this kind of phenomenon has disadvantage such as being alienated, while its positive side such as regular schedule of treatments can be considered.
Many
families devolve their
elders
to
care
homes
to
be nurtured
. Although this issue brings
positive
side such as regular programmed
-
treatments, its
negative
side such as being mentally isolated can
be considered
.
The proponents of this occurrence might assume that
care
homes
provide great nursing programs which
are scheduled
well. This is
because
care
homes
or nursing
homes
is
systematically
organised
. By dint of this, the
families&
#039; fellows
freely
enjoy their business without feeling anxiety or worry. As an illustration, Mom Home
cares
which lies in West Jakarta, arrange all the
elders&
#039; activities in 24-hour schedule. The nurses
start
to wake the patients up at 5. 00 am then doing physical exercise in every morning, they set the meal times up to 3 times a day, they prepare warm water for taking bath in the evening, the employees are
also
scheduled to invite the
elders
to enjoy walking around. Shortly, they
keep
the
ageing
people
there with a
good
schedule.
Looking from a
different
perspective, letting the
elders
live
at home
cares
incurs such a lonely feeling to the
elders
involved.
this
is
because
they will
be separated
from their beloved families. They will miss their children, they will be unable to
make
a joke with their grand sons and their grand daughters
everyday
. This, then,
finally
b
ajarings
about alienation, and at worst, the
elders
will feel
being expelled
and depressed.
In conclusion
, I believe that this kind of phenomenon has disadvantage such as
being alienated
, while its
positive
side such as regular schedule of treatments can
be considered
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes