In today’s modern world, the crime rate in everywhere around the globe is increasing at an alarming rate. A recent report research has shown that the continual growth in crime rate is significantly due to a large proportion of criminals will re-offend when they are released from prison. It is, therefore, important for us to establish the practical ways to tackle this problem.
To some extent, I believe that if there is rehabilitation being done in jail, the criminals are unlikely to commit the crime again after they are out of the prison. Rehabilitation is crucial and must be carried out in jail to educate them what are the good values and what are the bad. This action will further encourage them to think about what they have done over the years. Once they realise what they did in the past are wrong, they will regret and may not re-offend whatsoever.
Nevertheless, I have brainstormed and come out with the ideas that could be proved useful in kerbing this problem. To begin, there should be a change in the crime-related legislation. Those who commit serious crimes should be given a lengthy sentence to prison so that they have no opportunity to re-offend. Undoubtedly, it will indirectly become a deterrent to the would-be offender and thus helps to reduce the possibility of commit crimes after they are released from jail. In addition, the government should also arrange paid job to the criminals after they set free from prison, it is owing to the reason that they will not be facing financial hardships. According to a recent study conducted in Malaysia, most of the criminals will re-offend only when they have financial problems.
In conclusion, I believe there are tonnes of ways government can take to cope with this problem and most of the criminals will not commit crimes again if they were given a chance to contribute to society like everyone else do and have a proper job to earn a living.
In
today
’s modern world, the
crime
rate in everywhere around the globe is increasing at an alarming rate. A recent report research has shown that the continual growth in
crime
rate is
significantly
due to a large proportion of
criminals
will re-offend when they
are released
from
prison
. It is,
therefore
,
important
for us to establish the practical ways to tackle this problem.
To
some
extent, I believe that if there is rehabilitation
being done
in jail, the
criminals
are unlikely to
commit
the
crime
again after they are out of the
prison
. Rehabilitation is crucial and
must
be carried
out in jail to educate them what are the
good
values and what are the
bad
. This action will
further
encourage them to
think
about what they have done over the years. Once they
realise
what they did in the past are
wrong
, they will regret and may not re-offend whatsoever.
Nevertheless
, I have brainstormed and
come
out with the
ideas
that could
be proved
useful in
kerbing
this problem. To
begin
, there should be a
change
in the crime-related legislation. Those who
commit
serious
crimes
should be
given
a lengthy sentence to
prison
so
that they have no opportunity to re-offend.
Undoubtedly
, it will
indirectly
become a deterrent to the would-be offender and
thus
helps
to
reduce
the possibility of
commit
crimes
after they
are released
from jail.
In addition
, the
government
should
also
arrange paid job to the
criminals
after they set free from
prison
, it is owing to the reason that they will not be facing financial hardships. According to a recent study conducted in Malaysia, most of the
criminals
will re-offend
only
when they have financial problems.
In conclusion
, I believe there are tonnes of ways
government
can take to cope with this problem and most of the
criminals
will not
commit
crimes
again if they were
given
a chance to contribute to society like everyone else do and have a proper job to earn a living.
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