In recent days, there is an ongoing debate whether the main factor of working is a salary or an enjoyable environment. Some assert that having high income will help people solving the economic problems, while the others believe that gaining happiness is not only because of having much money but the important one is working in a friendly place. I personally reckon that both views are essential things but I think having enjoyable work is the most important one. Therefore, I will support my view with some considerations.
People obtaining high income will be able to encounter their financial problems because they can fulfil their daily needs. They believe that money can buy happiness because people will be able to buy some luxury things which amuse them. However, it can make them money oriented people. They spend much time only for working consequently they have no time with their family or even their own. Furthermore, they will be full of stress in accomplishing their workload.
On the other hand, people who overly enjoy their time in working field will consider their jobs as something which they love to do so because it is supported by the environment. It can increase their motivation in finishing the workloads. Taken the example, when an employee is encouraged by the others around them, they will try to give their best in their jobs. Moreover, it can increase the sense of belonging towards their works.
To sum up, having high salary is not only the primary factor to gain a bright future life, but it also needs affection in the workplace.
In recent days, there is an ongoing debate whether the main factor of
working
is a salary or an enjoyable environment.
Some
assert that
having
high income will
help
people
solving the economic problems, while the others believe that gaining happiness is not
only
because
of
having
much money
but
the
important
one is
working
in a friendly place. I
personally
reckon that both views are essential things
but
I
think
having
enjoyable work is the most
important
one.
Therefore
, I will support my view with
some
considerations.
People
obtaining high income will be able to encounter their financial problems
because
they can fulfil their daily needs. They believe that money can
buy
happiness
because
people
will be able to
buy
some
luxury things which amuse them.
However
, it can
make
them money oriented
people
. They spend much time
only
for
working
consequently
they have no time with their family or even their
own
.
Furthermore
, they will be full of
stress
in accomplishing their workload.
On the other hand
,
people
who
overly
enjoy their time in
working
field will consider their jobs as something which they
love
to do
so
because
it
is supported
by the environment. It can increase their motivation in finishing the workloads. Taken the example, when an employee
is encouraged
by
the others around them
, they will try to give their best in their jobs.
Moreover
, it can increase the sense of belonging towards their works.
To sum up,
having
high salary is not
only
the primary factor to gain a bright future life,
but
it
also
needs affection in the workplace.
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