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Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. Do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words. v.2

Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. v. 2
There are so many languages used in the world. But due to various reasons like business or travel, we need translation of language. Some assert that machine translation can never compete with human translation. I disagree with this statement and I will give some reasons and examples to prove my point. Google translate is one of the famous platforms used by many and it is increasing its accuracy over the time to make it at par with human interpretation. Every time after using this application the user needs to give his feedback and is able to correct any word for better meaning. The feedback given by users is checked by the employees of google for mistakes. For example, last time I translated "love" in Japanese it resulted into "like" but I could update the result and rectify it and now the sentence made sense. So with more and more people using it the data will become more accurate. Scientists are always inventing various methods of improvement of translation by using artificial intelligence. Whenever we have our phone with us and doing human translation it is recording all the data and understanding the mistakes available in its system. A research has shown the improvement in the quality of machine translation by comparing the result of translation now with 10years ago. The improvement is shocking. To conclude advancement in technology will definitely bring better results with regard to machine translation. Since it is not possible to have humans being in every situation for help, machines are the way to move forward and make life easier.
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languages
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in the world.
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due to various reasons like business or travel, we need
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translation
of language.
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Some
assert that
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machine
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translation
can never compete with
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human
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. I disagree with this statement and I will give
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some
reasons and examples to prove my point.

Did you mean "Google Translate"?
Google translate
is one of the
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famous
platforms
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used
by
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many
and it is increasing its accuracy over the time to
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make
it at par with
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human
interpretation. Every time after using this application the user needs to give his feedback and is able to correct any word for better meaning. The feedback
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given
by users is
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checked
by the employees of google for mistakes.
For example
, last time I translated
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love
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in Japanese it resulted into
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like
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"
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but
I could update the result and rectify it and
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now
the sentence made sense.
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So
with more and more
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people
using it the data will become more accurate.

Scientists are always inventing various methods of improvement of
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translation
by using artificial intelligence. Whenever we have our phone with us and doing
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human
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translation
it is recording all the data and understanding the mistakes available in its system.
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A research
has shown the improvement in the quality of
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machine
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translation
by comparing the result of
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translation
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now
with 10years ago. The improvement is shocking.

To conclude
advancement in technology will definitely bring better results with regard to
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machine
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translation
. Since it is not possible to have
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humans
being in every situation for
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help
,
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machines
are the way to
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move
forward and
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make
life easier.
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IELTS essay Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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