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Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. Do you agree or disagree? v.3

Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. v. 3
There are always certain pros and cons to each side and this topic is no different than that. Nowadays, the machines are taking over most of the jobs. We are losing our jobs to the machines, as it works more conveniently and quickly. However, there is also another side of this debate. Let us discuss this thoroughly below. Firstly, we should discuss the cons of the machine translations. There is no denying, that the machine translation saves a lot of time and they are grammatically error free, but we cannot solely rely on that. Such conversions might be quick to receive, but they are not always correct in the subject. For example, whenever, we are translating any document, it is vital that we do not change the meaning of the original and this is quite difficult to achieve through the machines A machine will not understand the essence of the subject matter and it will only change according to the programming done on the back end. Furthermore, through this we cannot achieve the full context of the author, as it was written in the original. It might nullify the effect of the message, which the writer wanted to convey. Secondly, we should discuss the pros of such translations. As already discussed earlier, the MT is faster and saves time. Also, if someone needs the translation in less time than this is the need of the hour. For example, there are many foreigners who use the Google translator, whenever they are travelling abroad. These translations help such tourists to understand the language of an alien country. To conclude, it can be said that there are some things in which MT is more useful and there are some things in which human translation is quite necessary. MT can be efficient, but it needs us to programme it. We humans are better in conversions of the document. Thus, it depends on the type of things, we want to use the translators.
There are always certain pros and cons to each side and this topic is no
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different
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than
that. Nowadays, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
are taking over most of the jobs. We are losing our jobs to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
, as it works more
conveniently
and
quickly
.
However
, there is
also
another side of this debate.
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Let
us discuss this
thoroughly
below.

Firstly
, we should discuss the cons of the
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machine
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translations
. There is no denying, that the
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machine
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translation
saves
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a lot of
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time and
they are
grammatically
error free,
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but
we cannot
solely
rely on that. Such conversions might be quick to receive,
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but
they are not always correct in the subject.
For example
, whenever, we are translating any document, it is vital that we do not
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change
the meaning of the original and this is quite difficult to achieve through the
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machines
A
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machine
will not understand the essence of the
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subject matter
and it will
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only
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change
according to the programming done on the back
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end
.
Furthermore
, through this we cannot achieve the full context of the author, as it
was written
in the original. It might nullify the effect of the message, which the writer wanted to convey.

Secondly
, we should discuss the pros of such
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translations
. As already discussed earlier, the MT is faster and saves time.
Also
, if someone needs the
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translation
in less time than this is the need of the hour.
For example
, there are
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many
foreigners who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the Google translator, whenever they are travelling abroad. These
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
translations
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
such tourists to understand the language of an alien country.

To conclude
, it can
be said
that there are
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some
things in which MT is more useful and there are
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some
things in which human
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translation
is quite necessary. MT can be efficient,
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but
it needs us to
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programme
it. We humans are better in conversions of the document.
Thus
, it depends on the type of things, we want to
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use
the translators.
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IELTS essay Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
328 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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