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Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. v. 2
As mankind is advancing in every aspect of the life there are many changes which took place in recent years. Some school of thought suggests that if someone who is living in a nation where he has to communicate in the international language that can be problematic for him from socially and practically conceptualize. This essay will discuss why individuals have to face some problems while living in a different country and along why I favour the statement in the upcoming paragraphs. There are ample number of problems which are being faced by those who have to live abroad due to work or study as it challenges an individual in several ways from social to practical. By considering social issues that have been tackled by someone who is living far away from his home in another part of the world is that language barrier is the main concern as a language is a mixture of a lot of things such as local phrases, slangs and accents which are difficult to understand by a non-native speaker that leads to difficulties Secondly, cultural difference is a cause which have been faced by everyone as distinct commodities have been originated by cultural norms. Accepting traditions of others can be the biggest barrier of a human. Hence, these are the social impacts that are the issues which a man need to experienced while at different nation. Furthermore, the practical problem is the second most common issue which one has to tackle in another country. Adaptability to new environment leads to other issues such as weather change and food availability that can be challenging at a time. In addition, the financial burden can increase due to change of the place as an individual has to rent accommodation for himself to live and living among strangers could be problematic as everyone have different eating habits. On the contrary, someone who is going to live in another country will explore different places in that area is beneficial for him in terms of experience. Next, they explore their knowledge bank with it. To conclude, this essay argued why living abroad brings challenges for a somebody from practical and social perspective. I think a man who does not challenge oriented should opt this option as it requires a lot of things from him.
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As
mankind is advancing in every aspect of the life there are
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many
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changes
which took place in recent years.

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Some
school of
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thought
suggests that if someone
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who
is
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living
in a nation where he
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has to
communicate in the international language that can be problematic for him from
socially
and
practically
conceptualize. This essay will discuss why individuals
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have to
face
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some
problems while
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living
in a
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different
country and along why I
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favour
the statement in the upcoming paragraphs.

There are ample number of problems which are
being faced
by those
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who
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have to
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live
abroad due to work or study as it challenges an individual in several ways from
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social
to practical. By considering
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social
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issues
that have
been tackled
by someone
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who
is
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living
far away from his home in another part of the world is that language barrier is the main concern as a language is a mixture of
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a lot of
things such as local phrases,
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slangs
and accents which are difficult to understand by a non-native speaker that leads to difficulties

Secondly
, cultural difference is a cause which have
been faced
by everyone as distinct commodities have
been originated
by cultural norms. Accepting traditions of others can be the biggest barrier of a human.
Hence
, these are the
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social
impacts that are the
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issues
which a
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man
need to experienced while at
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different
nation.

Furthermore
, the practical problem is the second most common
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issue
which one
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has to
tackle in another country. Adaptability to new environment leads to other
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issues
such as weather
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change
and food availability that can be challenging at a time.
In addition
, the financial burden can increase due to
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change
of the place as an individual
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has to
rent accommodation for himself to
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live
and
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living
among strangers could be problematic as everyone
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have
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different
eating habits.

On the contrary
, someone
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who
is going to
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live
in another country will explore
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different
places in that area is beneficial for him in terms of experience.
Next
, they explore their knowledge bank with it.

To conclude
, this essay argued why
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living
abroad brings challenges for a somebody from practical and
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social
perspective. I
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think
a
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man
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who
does not challenge oriented should opt this option as it requires
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a lot of
things from him.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. v. 2

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
384 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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