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IELTS Examiner Sample Answer Foreign Languages by Dave Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement v.2

IELTS Examiner Sample Answer Foreign Languages by Dave Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems with this statement v. 2
Nowadays people who live in abroad are face with speaking foreign language and this may lead to serious social and practical problems. I completely agree with this statement. Being unable to speak a foreign language could account isolation, because verbal communication is one of the vital skills in society in order to communicate with people otherwise, they may lose their confidence and could not able to interact with other people. people who immigrate aimlessly are a salient example Because they may not able to find friends or an appropriate job. At the same time, practical issues may cause some serious problems such as unemployment because working in a foreign country requires that being able to speak that language as well. In this way people could find their ideal job quickly so, if a person does not know the language of a country, even with experience and expertise, would not be successful to find a job. To illustrate, a knowledgeable teacher who can only speak English could not be a successful teacher in Italy because this action needed knowing Italian language. In conclusion, one of the main needs of living abroad is being able to speak in that country language if not people encounter vary social and practical issues. In my vantage point people who want to living in a foreign country should prepare themselves and have a practical plan before immigration
Nowadays
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people
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who
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live
in abroad are face with speaking
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foreign
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language
and this may lead to serious social and
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practical
problems. I completely
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agree
with this statement.

Being unable to
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speak
a
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foreign
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language
could account isolation,
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because
verbal communication is one of the vital
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skills
in society in order to communicate with
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people
otherwise
, they may lose their confidence and could not
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able
to interact with other
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people
.
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people
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who
immigrate
aimlessly
are a salient example
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Because
they may not
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able
to find friends or an appropriate job.

At the same time,
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practical
issues may cause
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some
serious problems such as unemployment
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because
working in a
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foreign
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country
requires that being
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able
to
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speak
that
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language
as well
. In this way
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people
could find their ideal job
quickly
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so
, if a person does not know the
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language
of a
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country
, even with experience and expertise, would not be successful to find a job. To illustrate, a knowledgeable teacher
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who
can
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only
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speak
English could not be a successful teacher in Italy
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because
this action needed knowing Italian language.

In conclusion
, one of the main needs of living abroad is being
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able
to
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speak
in that
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country
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language
if not
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people
encounter vary social and
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practical
issues. In my vantage point
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people
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who
want to
Did you mean "live"?
living
in a
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foreign
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country
should prepare themselves and have a
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practical
plan
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before
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
immigration
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
To have another language is to possess a second soul.
Charlemagne

IELTS essay IELTS Examiner Sample Answer Foreign Languages by Dave Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems with this statement v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
230 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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