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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.43

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extant v. 43
It is indeed that the people living in the abroad used to have a verbal communication in a foreign language. Some intellectuals opine that these practices of the secondary language may not only introduce the social problem, but also elevate the practical problems. I agree with the above notion. To begin with, the other language may impose a hazardous impact on an individual’s social life. The diverse languages are representing their cultures of origin. Consequently, the foreign language might resist a person to socialize with other people due to differences in their language. Moreover, many introvert people could not share their views to others due to the barrier of verbal communication. This lack of communication causes many social problems to the people. For instance, the scarce knowledge of the German language prevents the English man to socialize with others. As a result, his loneliness will deter his emotional health and at worst; causes the depression. Thus, the social life of a person greatly relies on his comfort at a language. Furthermore, the practical problems are also accelerated to the aviation of the language. In abroad, a layman has to conduct his conversation in that aboriginal language. Therefore, in many situations he has to suffer from the misinterpretation, as well as unaware of the language. For example, the salesman in abroad could not perform the better with the conversation with his clients in the foreign language. In addition, many students at abroad could not inculcate their interpersonal skills due to their limits of verbal communication in other languages. In conclusion, the nature of an individual predominantly dependent on his mother language. Although, a person learns the other language at compatible level, his performance would lags at many sections due to a foreign language. To eliminate such a negative side, one should enrich his knowledge of that other language.
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that the
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people
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abroad
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used
to have a verbal
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communication
in a
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foreign
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language
.
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intellectuals opine that these practices of the secondary
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language
may not
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only
introduce the
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social
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problem
,
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but
also
elevate the practical
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problems
. I
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agree
with the above notion.

To
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begin
with, the
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other
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language
may impose a hazardous impact on an individual’s
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social
life. The diverse
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languages
are representing their cultures of origin.
Consequently
, the
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foreign
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language
might resist a person to socialize with
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other
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people
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due
to differences in their
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language
.
Moreover
,
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many
introvert
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people
could not share their views to others
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due
to the barrier of verbal
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communication
. This lack of
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communication
causes
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many
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social
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problems
to the
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people
.
For instance
, the scarce knowledge of the German
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language
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prevents
the English
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man
to socialize with others.
As a result
, his loneliness will deter his emotional health and at worst; causes the depression.
Thus
, the
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social
life of a person
greatly
relies on his comfort at a language.

Furthermore
, the practical
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problems
are
also
accelerated to the aviation of the
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language
. In
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abroad
, a layman
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has to
conduct his conversation in that aboriginal
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language
.
Therefore
, in
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many
situations he
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has to
suffer from the misinterpretation,
as well
as unaware of the
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language
.
For example
, the salesman in
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abroad
could not perform the better with the conversation with his clients in the
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foreign
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language
.
In addition
,
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many
students at
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abroad
could not inculcate their interpersonal
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skills
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due
to their limits of verbal
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communication
in
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other
languages.

In conclusion
, the nature of an individual
predominantly
dependent on his mother
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language
. Although, a person learns the
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other
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language
at compatible level, his performance would
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lags
at
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many
sections
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due
to a
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foreign
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language
. To eliminate such a
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negative
side, one should enrich his knowledge of that
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other
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language
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extant v. 43

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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