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In today s times the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion. v.2

Internet play an essential role in everyone's life. In present days, some multitudes believe that whether online study is better or not. Therefore, before arriving on a decision, both views will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the former proclivity. Discussing the first view, the most intrinsic one is that it is saving the time or money. To justify, in these days technology has been increased which is most common in internet. with the help of internet scholars have not need to go from one place to another place. Consequently, they have not need use private or public automobiles. Hence atmosphere is clean and traffic roads jam is droped as well as they have no need to money invest on tickets or patrol/ diesel.
Internet
play
an essential role in everyone's life. In present days,
some
multitudes believe that whether online study is better or not.
Therefore
,
before
arriving on
a decision, both views will
be discussed
in upcoming paragraphs.

To
begin
with there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the former proclivity. Discussing the
first
view, the most intrinsic one is that it is saving the time or money. To justify, in these
days
technology has
been increased
which is most common in internet.
with
the
help
of internet scholars have not
need
to go from one place to another place.
Consequently
, they have not
need
use
private or public automobiles.
Hence
atmosphere is clean and traffic roads jam is
droped
as well
as they have no need to money invest on tickets or patrol/ diesel.
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IELTS essay It's today times the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some people prefer online courses to study and they think is better. others prefer classroom education.

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