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In today s times the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion. v.2

Internet play an essential role in everyone's life. In present days, some multitudes believe that whether online study is better or not. Therefore, before arriving on a decision, both views will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the former proclivity. Discussing the first view, the most intrinsic one is that it is saving the time or money. To justify, in these days technology has been increased which is most common in internet. with the help of internet scholars have not need to go from one place to another place. Consequently, they have not need use private or public automobiles. Hence atmosphere is clean and traffic roads jam is droped as well as they have no need to money invest on tickets or patrol/ diesel.

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some
 multitudes believe that whether online study is better or not. Therefore
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 a decision, both views will be discussed
 in upcoming paragraphs.

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begin
 with there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the former proclivity. Discussing the first
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use
 private or public automobiles. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
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as well
 as they have no need to money invest on tickets or patrol/ diesel. 