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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree v.35

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. v. 35
Staying abroad and speaking the local language can be challenging, socially as well as practically. In my opinion, I disagree with the fact that social and practical implications could be serious while living in abroad. However, speaking a foreign language in another country while living there might be challenging, but it won't be a serious issue that will create social and practical hurdles. It has always been observed that anywhere in the foreign province, one has to face challenges during the initial phase of the stay, maybe during the first few months, but it should always be kept in mind that one should be ready to learn the local wording if the plans are to reside in the foreign country for a longer period. If the stay is for a shorter duration stay communications and other tasks related to daily living can be managed while interacting with the people locally or during other day-to-day work. Having knowledge about the second official wording, such as English wording, which is mostly spoken globally at local as well as offices in most of the countries. In the meantime, once should learn about the local wording as soon as possible, which will ease the living in that particular area. In conclusion, having knowledge of a foreign language will always be useful for a comfortable living in a foreign country. However, it will not cause and serious problems, both socially and practically. It is just the fact that everyone takes time to get comfortable in a new region and situations can be managed without causing any serious implications.
Staying abroad and speaking the
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local
language can be challenging,
socially
as well
as
practically
. In my opinion, I
Consider using "disagree that".
disagree with the fact that
social and practical implications could be
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serious
while
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living
in abroad.
However
, speaking a
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foreign
language in another
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country
while
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living
there might be challenging,
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but
it won't be a
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serious
issue that will create social and practical hurdles. It has always
been observed
that anywhere in the
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foreign
province, one
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has to
face challenges during the initial phase of the stay, maybe during the
first
few months,
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but
it should always be
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kept
in mind that one should be ready to learn the
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local
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wording
if the plans are to reside in the
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foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
for a longer period. If the stay is for a shorter duration stay communications and other tasks related to daily
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living
can
be managed
while interacting with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
locally
or during other day-to-day work. Having knowledge about the second official
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wording
, such as English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wording
, which is
mostly
spoken globally at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
as well
as offices in most of the
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countries
. In the meantime, once should learn about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
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wording
as
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soon
as possible, which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
the
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living
in that particular area.

In conclusion
, having knowledge of a
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foreign
language will always be useful for a comfortable
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living
in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
However
, it will not cause and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
serious
problems, both
socially
and
practically
. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
the fact that everyone takes time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
comfortable in a new region and situations can
be managed
without causing any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
serious
implications.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
Language is to the mind more than light is to the eye.
William Gibson

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. v. 35

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
263 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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