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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree v.35

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. v. 35
Staying abroad and speaking the local language can be challenging, socially as well as practically. In my opinion, I disagree with the fact that social and practical implications could be serious while living in abroad. However, speaking a foreign language in another country while living there might be challenging, but it won't be a serious issue that will create social and practical hurdles. It has always been observed that anywhere in the foreign province, one has to face challenges during the initial phase of the stay, maybe during the first few months, but it should always be kept in mind that one should be ready to learn the local wording if the plans are to reside in the foreign country for a longer period. If the stay is for a shorter duration stay communications and other tasks related to daily living can be managed while interacting with the people locally or during other day-to-day work. Having knowledge about the second official wording, such as English wording, which is mostly spoken globally at local as well as offices in most of the countries. In the meantime, once should learn about the local wording as soon as possible, which will ease the living in that particular area. In conclusion, having knowledge of a foreign language will always be useful for a comfortable living in a foreign country. However, it will not cause and serious problems, both socially and practically. It is just the fact that everyone takes time to get comfortable in a new region and situations can be managed without causing any serious implications.
Staying abroad and speaking the
local
language can be challenging,
socially
as well
as
practically
. In my opinion, I
disagree with the fact that
social and practical implications could be
serious
while
living
in abroad.
However
, speaking a
foreign
language in another
country
while
living
there might be challenging,
but
it won't be a
serious
issue that will create social and practical hurdles. It has always
been observed
that anywhere in the
foreign
province, one
has to
face challenges during the initial phase of the stay, maybe during the
first
few months,
but
it should always be
kept
in mind that one should be ready to learn the
local
wording
if the plans are to reside in the
foreign
country
for a longer period. If the stay is for a shorter duration stay communications and other tasks related to daily
living
can
be managed
while interacting with the
people
locally
or during other day-to-day work. Having knowledge about the second official
wording
, such as English
wording
, which is
mostly
spoken globally at
local
as well
as offices in most of the
countries
. In the meantime, once should learn about the
local
wording
as
soon
as possible, which will
ease
the
living
in that particular area.

In conclusion
, having knowledge of a
foreign
language will always be useful for a comfortable
living
in a
foreign
country
.
However
, it will not cause and
serious
problems, both
socially
and
practically
. It is
just
the fact that everyone takes time to
get
comfortable in a new region and situations can
be managed
without causing any
serious
implications.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. v. 35

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
263 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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