Dear Tom,
I hope you' re well. I' m writing to let you know that when I visited you last weekend I have forgotten my coat.
It si yellow coat with long-sleeve and black wide belt. I' m not sure where I left it, but assume that I put it on a chair in a corridor when I moved from your house. If it is not there, please check in wardrobe in room where I slept.
What is the most important for me I realised that in the coat pocket I left my credit card. So now I have a big headache because of that. I don' t have easy access to my money, and almost every two-day I have to visit bank to collect them.
I would be really grateful if you could send me this card via post letter. I know that you are going to visit me in next month but I' m afraid that I' m not able to wait so long on this card. Getting back coat is not so urgent for me and I can wait on it when you will come to me.
Please, let me know if you could do me this favour.
Keep in touch
Sue
Dear Tom,
I hope
you&
#039; re well.
I&
#039; m writing to
let
you know that when I visited you last weekend I have forgotten my coat.
It
si
yellow coat with long-sleeve and black wide belt.
I&
#039; m not sure where I
left
it,
but
assume that I put it on a chair in a corridor when I
moved
from your
house
. If it is not there,
please
check
in wardrobe in room where I slept.
What is the most
important
for me I
realised
that in the coat pocket I
left
my credit card.
So
now
I have a
big
headache
because
of that. I
don&
#039; t have easy access to my money, and almost every two-day I
have to
visit bank to collect them.
I would be
really
grateful if you could
send
me this card via post letter.
I
know that you are going to visit me in
next
month
but
I&
#039; m afraid that
I&
#039; m not able to wait
so
long on this card. Getting back coat is not
so
urgent for me and I can wait on it when you will
come
to me.
Please
,
let
me know if you could do me this
favour
.
Keep
in touch
Sue
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