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you have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containig some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what coat look like, whe v.7

you have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containig some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what coat look like, whe v. 7
Dear Tom, I hope you' re well. I' m writing to let you know that when I visited you last weekend I have forgotten my coat. It si yellow coat with long-sleeve and black wide belt. I' m not sure where I left it, but assume that I put it on a chair in a corridor when I moved from your house. If it is not there, please check in wardrobe in room where I slept. What is the most important for me I realised that in the coat pocket I left my credit card. So now I have a big headache because of that. I don' t have easy access to my money, and almost every two-day I have to visit bank to collect them. I would be really grateful if you could send me this card via post letter. I know that you are going to visit me in next month but I' m afraid that I' m not able to wait so long on this card. Getting back coat is not so urgent for me and I can wait on it when you will come to me. Please, let me know if you could do me this favour. Keep in touch Sue
Dear Tom,

I hope
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you&
#039; re well.
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I&
#039; m writing to
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let
you know that when I visited you last weekend I have forgotten my coat.

It seems that the possessive pronoun "its" fits better in this context. Please verify.
It
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si
yellow coat with long-sleeve and black wide belt.
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I&
#039; m not sure where I
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left
it,
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but
assume that I put it on a chair in a corridor when I
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moved
from your
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house
. If it is not there,
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
in wardrobe in room where I slept.

What is the most
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important
for me I
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realised
that in the coat pocket I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my credit card.
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So
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now
I have a
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big
headache
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because
of that. I
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don&
#039; t have easy access to my money, and almost every two-day I
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have to
visit bank to collect them.

I would be
really
grateful if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me this card via post letter.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
know that you are going to visit me in
next
month
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but
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I&
#039; m afraid that
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I&
#039; m not able to wait
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
long on this card. Getting back coat is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
urgent for me and I can wait on it when you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to me.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
,
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let
me know if you could do me this
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
.

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Keep
in touch

Sue
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes
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IELTS essay you have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containig some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what coat look like, whe v. 7

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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