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Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.8

Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. v. 8
The existence of libraries is believed to have immense significance in this present scenario; however, it has become an issue of debate that the libraries need to be shut down owing to the availability of other alternatives. I fully disagree with the above statement, and further, the positives of libraries are yet to be analyzed in the subsequent paragraphs. The positives that come along with the usage of libraries need to be considered that seem to be effective in certain ways. The first and foremost is a decrease of mind distraction as there is a peaceful ambiance which helps to incline the concentration of readers; meanwhile, they do not have to face hindrances whilst doing the study. Moreover, learners can accumulate specific knowledge as much as they can, thereby reading the number of books written by different reputed authors with the full of lucrative information. Along with this, libraries help to build strong social bonding among the readers as they enjoy while reading together as well as share their views for the enhancement of learning. To commence with, libraries tend to offer free educational resources to every reader such as books, internet access, and educational training programs. Apart from this, most of the libraries issue a card to the readers for borrowing the books to read at home, whereby they need not spend money in order to buy the books from local book shops. In conclusion, although better alternatives are available for getting information. Having said that the role of libraries cannot be overlooked; hence, it is a must for readers to have proper attention towards libraries for making their learning better.
The existence of libraries
is believed
to have immense significance in this present scenario;
however
, it has become an issue of debate that the libraries need to
be shut
down owing to the availability of other alternatives. I
fully
disagree with the above statement, and
further
, the positives of libraries are
yet
to
be analyzed
in the subsequent paragraphs.

The positives that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
along with the usage of libraries need to
be considered
that seem to be effective in certain ways. The
first
and foremost is a decrease of mind distraction as there is a peaceful ambiance which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to incline the concentration of readers; meanwhile, they do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
face hindrances whilst doing the study.
Moreover
, learners can accumulate specific knowledge as much as they can, thereby reading the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
written by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
reputed authors with the full of lucrative information. Along with this, libraries
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to build strong social bonding among the readers as they enjoy while reading together
as well
as share their views for the enhancement of learning.

To commence with, libraries tend to offer free educational resources to every reader such as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, internet access, and educational training programs. Apart from this, most of the libraries issue a card to the readers for borrowing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
to read at home, whereby they need not spend money in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
from local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
shops.

In conclusion
, although better alternatives are available for getting information. Having said that the role of libraries cannot
be overlooked
;
hence
, it is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
for readers to have proper attention towards libraries for making their learning better.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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