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Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. v. 2
For the time being, boundless development in technology has led to emergence of enormous alternatives instead of customary way of approaching things including libraries. It has always been a controversial issue amongst people whether to keep the traditional libraries or replace all of them. Although lots of rational reasons, which some will be further mentioned, have been introduced in favour of newly proposed options taking place of libraries, I highly believe we need to stick to the long-established perspective towards this issue indicating that having libraries is vital. Firstly, it is argued that publishing books in order to sell and keep some at the libraries will be harmful to environment in the long term as there is no other way in producing paper but cutting trees. While this may be true, we cannot set fire to existing libraries and close them down since some signed editions are kept in libraries, which needs to be referred to in some cases. Therefore, it is vital that the books in libraries are accessible to the ones who are fond of reading books and investigating our history. Secondly, some believe that through some technological advances you are in a position to have access to all sources at once conveniently. Others, however, are of the opinion that having access to anything, anytime may lead to some crucial problems in all aspects; for instance, killing enthusiasm, creativity, and most importantly enhancing some academic erroneous attitudes as plagiarism. Furthermore, individuals congregate in a rather scholastic environment, which does not appear to be disadvantageous. In conclusion, I absolutely disagree that all the libraries have to be shut down. While, as is mentioned above, the proponents of this idea are rightful in some particular situations, it is impossible to refuse the indispensable role of libraries in the society.
For the time being, boundless development in technology has led to emergence of enormous alternatives
instead
of customary way of approaching things including libraries. It has always been a controversial issue amongst
people
whether to
keep
the traditional libraries or replace all of them. Although lots of rational reasons, which
some
will be
further
mentioned, have
been introduced
in
favour
of
newly
proposed options taking place of libraries, I
highly
believe we need to stick to the long-established perspective towards this issue indicating that having libraries is vital.

Firstly
, it
is argued
that publishing books in order to sell and
keep
some
at the libraries will be harmful to environment in the long term as there is no other way in producing paper
but
cutting trees. While this may be true, we cannot set fire to existing libraries and close them down since
some
signed editions are
kept
in libraries, which needs to
be referred
to in
some
cases.
Therefore
, it is vital that the books in libraries are accessible to the ones who are fond of reading books and investigating our history.

Secondly
,
some
believe that through
some
technological advances you are in a position to have access to all sources at once
conveniently
. Others,
however
, are of the opinion that having access to anything, anytime may lead to
some
crucial problems in all aspects;
for instance
, killing enthusiasm, creativity, and most
importantly
enhancing
some
academic erroneous attitudes as plagiarism.
Furthermore
, individuals congregate in a
rather
scholastic environment, which does not appear to be disadvantageous.

In conclusion
, I
absolutely
disagree that all the libraries
have to
be shut
down. While, as
is mentioned
above, the proponents of this
idea
are rightful in
some
particular situations, it is impossible to refuse the indispensable role of libraries in the society.
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IELTS essay Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. v. 2

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