People attend to jobs and work in that jobs to earn money to use that money in their life to pay expenses, improve their life quality, also making a better life for their families. But there are some other motivators for human rather than money for working like the social position which that person gets, contributions which they could do to their society and etc. While the mandatory believe about business people is that their only goal is money, I believe these people also have some other motivators to do their job.
The notion which is most of business people are only motivated by the desire of money relies of the aim of their jobs. The aim of business jobs is to earn more money as they can do. So this notion formed that the aim of them and motivator of them is money. If it is a true statement, Therefore, aim of a musician is only music, aim of a mine worker is just digging mines. We know this is not true for them, so same for business people. We couldn’t judge about their people desires with only considering their jobs conditions.
In addition, there are a lot of people who involved in business jobs with a standard salary. Only a few people in the hierarchy pyramid of business jobs earn huge money. There are many other jobs with higher salaries to attend. If their only motivator is money, then why these people stay in business related jobs. My uncle who was a businessman for many years, and now retired, salary is less than my fathers who have worked for a medical company. But I know my uncle motivator the business is that he was so talented in that field. In addition, he loved his job which resulted to stay on that job for many years with a standard salary.
In summary, while the main propose of working is earn money for all of the people, there are many other motivators rather than money which persuade people to do their jobs. In my opinion considering business people aim only money is a big mistake which driven from the aim of these people jobs. Therefore, these people like other people love their jobs and have many other motivators rather than money.
People
attend to
jobs
and work in that
jobs
to
earn
money
to
use
that
money
in their life to pay expenses,
improve
their life quality,
also
making a better life for their families.
But
there are
some
other
motivators
for human
rather
than
money
for working like the social position which that person
gets
, contributions which they could do to their society
and etc
. While the mandatory believe about
business
people
is
that their
only
goal is
money
, I believe these
people
also
have
some
other
motivators
to do their job.
The notion which is most of
business
people
are
only
motivated by the desire of
money
relies
of the
aim
of their
jobs
. The
aim
of
business
jobs
is to
earn
more
money
as they can do.
So
this notion formed that the
aim
of them and
motivator
of them is
money
. If it is a true statement,
Therefore
,
aim
of a musician is
only
music,
aim
of a mine worker is
just
digging mines. We know this is not true for them,
so
same for
business
people
. We couldn’t judge about their
people
desires
with
only
considering their
jobs
conditions.
In addition
, there are
a lot of
people
who involved in
business
jobs
with a standard salary.
Only
a few
people
in the hierarchy pyramid of
business
jobs
earn
huge
money
. There are
many
other
jobs
with higher salaries to attend. If their
only
motivator
is
money
, then why these
people
stay in
business
related
jobs
. My uncle who was a businessman for
many
years, and
now
retired, salary is less than my fathers who have worked for a medical
company
.
But
I know my uncle
motivator
the
business
is that he was
so
talented in that field.
In addition
, he
loved
his
job
which resulted to stay on that
job
for
many
years with a standard salary.
In summary, while the main propose of working is
earn
money
for
all of the
people
, there are
many
other
motivators
rather
than
money
which persuade
people
to do their
jobs
.
In
my opinion considering
business
people
aim
only
money
is a
big
mistake which driven from the
aim
of these
people
jobs
.
Therefore
, these
people
like
other
people
love
their
jobs
and have
many
other
motivators
rather
than
money
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
82Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes